Book Info
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Project Leader:
IvyReed
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Participants:
The WEbook community -
Who Can Write:
Project Leader Only -
Category:
Non-Fiction -
Genre:
Parenting & Family
Philosophy -
Language:
English
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" Still Reaching the Candle Still Burns "
This project book includes stories and poetry from my life. I may use a few poems written by my children too, I really haven't desided on that yet. The poetry and stories may be out of order in the beginning. Hopefully I can rearrange them to make more sense as I write. As I reflect on my life as a wife, mother and grandmother I jump time. Writing has never come easy for me. At times like my life my thoughts are fragmented and are tangled in depressive writing, then they become whimsical.
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GIVE FEEDBACK
Thank you to all who have visited this poetry contest project and so graciously left feedbak. I really appreciate your feedback. Just to know that someone took the time out of their busy schedule to cast a vote and read my poetry is heart warming.
Good luck to you all. You are all winners. Keep on writing and keep leaving feedback to everything you have the time to. I'll try my best to do the same.
~ Ivy
Good luck to you all. You are all winners. Keep on writing and keep leaving feedback to everything you have the time to. I'll try my best to do the same.
~ Ivy
Chasing Shadows was a fairly clever piece and I like the imagery you used of somewhat reflecting mirrors and shifting sands =p
Candles of faith was very well written. I like how the poem evolved and switched tones as it progressed (like at first the tone seemed very depressing, but as it went on it changed to a more hopeful light).
The imagery in The Days of Wine and Roses was very moving, I especially enjoyed how the modern "Happily ever after" was explained tied together with a "rare love".
Well done, you have my vote :P
Candles of faith was very well written. I like how the poem evolved and switched tones as it progressed (like at first the tone seemed very depressing, but as it went on it changed to a more hopeful light).
The imagery in The Days of Wine and Roses was very moving, I especially enjoyed how the modern "Happily ever after" was explained tied together with a "rare love".
Well done, you have my vote :P
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Your imagery is wonderfull so very well done
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-vote
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-vote
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Your words seem to flow so freely to say what you mean & to let the reader not only see the emotions you're feeling, but to feel them. I was impressed with all 3 poems & have given a "YES" vote. Your use of nature, your surroundings & what you see & hear included in your poetry makes it so easy to picture being there. I'm glad I got to read them.
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Your words paint pictures so beautiful and full of emotions.
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Liz,
These are heartwarming and humanly endearing...
Beautiful expressions...
WRITE ON...!
Joanne :-)
These are heartwarming and humanly endearing...
Beautiful expressions...
WRITE ON...!
Joanne :-)
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I couldn't pick a favourite, they all stood out, shining like you do, on every given day, here at WEbook, love Wennie xxxhugs
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General:
vote submitted...
here is my link:
http://www.webook.com/project/3-Best
like what you see leave a vote or feedback....
Content:
My favorite is " The Days of Wine and Roses "
a lovely read...
romantic in nature...
Imagery:
appealing...
vote submitted...
here is my link:
http://www.webook.com/project/3-Best
like what you see leave a vote or feedback....
Content:
My favorite is " The Days of Wine and Roses "
a lovely read...
romantic in nature...
Imagery:
appealing...
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Good work. You have my vote.
Check out mine?http://www.webook.com/project/Touch-My-Heart
Please and thank you!
Check out mine?http://www.webook.com/project/Touch-My-Heart
Please and thank you!
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good work here, i enjoyed reading them, good luck
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles
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First and foremost I want to thank all my friends for reading my selections and leaving feedback and voting. Whether I win or lose in this contest is unimportant. I have already won by having such wonderful friends here on webook. I'm blessed to have met you all.
Sincerely,
~ Ivy ~
Sincerely,
~ Ivy ~
http://www.webook.com/project.aspx?url=Superbia
your style is different..but good different...good luck
your style is different..but good different...good luck
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a big PUBLISH!!!
if you want to find mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you.
if you want to find mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you.
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Very nice poetry and holds emotional appeal. Well written with a very nice flow on the whole.
Good luck with the vote.
Kind Regards John
Good luck with the vote.
Kind Regards John
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I voted! How about you? Have you voted?
Thanks for inviting me to view your poem.
Thanks for inviting me to view your poem.
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Content:
I can hear your voice in "Chasing Shadows." You speak as a sage. You have experienced life, and you are not suffering from delusions. This is an existential work of art.
I can hear your voice in "Chasing Shadows." You speak as a sage. You have experienced life, and you are not suffering from delusions. This is an existential work of art.
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General:
I love the titles that you selected for your books and for these three poems.
Content:
Chasing Shadows is a wonderful reminder of how life slips away as easily as our dreams.
The Days of Wine and Roses holds out hope for all of us . . . that the best is yet to come.
Imagery:
My favorite imagery:
"Lovers and friends come and go;
Like ocean waves and shifting sands."
That says it all.
Good Luck
I love the titles that you selected for your books and for these three poems.
Content:
Chasing Shadows is a wonderful reminder of how life slips away as easily as our dreams.
The Days of Wine and Roses holds out hope for all of us . . . that the best is yet to come.
Imagery:
My favorite imagery:
"Lovers and friends come and go;
Like ocean waves and shifting sands."
That says it all.
Good Luck
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I like your poems, you are a really good writer, I gave you a yes vote, nicely done.
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Ivy, I like this poem and its message...there are a couple of minor things that I think you should change...
Edit...
" can't Live in..." suggest lower case "live"
" the gift's it..." suggest removal of apostrophe
Much success in the vote.
Edit...
" can't Live in..." suggest lower case "live"
" the gift's it..." suggest removal of apostrophe
Much success in the vote.
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Over all, I liked the first best. I liked the story of the second best.
They are all worthy. I've voted. Good luck to you.
They are all worthy. I've voted. Good luck to you.
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You already know I think you are a winner, and to that end here is my vote to publish all three..Good Luck dear....Russ♫♫♪♥♥♥
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Thank you Chris for visiting my poetry selections and leaving feedback. I really appreciate it.
~ Ivy~
~ Ivy~
Blackkthought: It was enlightening to see you plugged your own 3 poems for your project here and failed to leave feedback for my 3 poems. Is that right ? " Food For Thought!"
~ Ivy
~ Ivy
I wanted to take this opportunity to thank all my friends for your thoughtful comments on my poetry here and for assisting me in editing with your feedback. As you know it's better to have a lot of eyes on your writing. It is a learning experence and a chance to grow in friendship. No one here is perfect although there may be some that would disagree. I came to the webook sight to share my thoughts and to become a better writer. We all struggle at times with health issues or writers block. I sure do anyway. Sometimes I loose interest in writing altogether among many other things. The encouragement I have received here is a blessing. I hope my encouragement and assistance to others has been of servise as well.. Many blessing to you all and good luck in the poetry contest.
Always,
~ Ivy ~
Always,
~ Ivy ~
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