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Best Friends
Elle Main is a normal high schooler. She gets good grades, has a few good friends, and life seems good. Especially with her best friend, Edgar Wesley. Both are good kids, until one faithful day happened.
Edgar turned for the worse. Feeling suicidal, and wanting everyone to feel the pain he was feeling, he took some of his classmates lives.
Months later, Elle is in an interrogation room because everyone suspected she knew he was going to do something like this. Now its time to tell her story;th ... more »
Edgar turned for the worse. Feeling suicidal, and wanting everyone to feel the pain he was feeling, he took some of his classmates lives.
Months later, Elle is in an interrogation room because everyone suspected she knew he was going to do something like this. Now its time to tell her story;th ... more »
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I will like some critiquing and feedback and advice. I know this is a very sensitive topic.
it sounds really interesting! i just found a few things you need to correct.
"until one faithful day happen."
~ did you mean "fateful"? and "happen" should be corrected to "happened."
"feeling suicidal, and wanted everyone to feel the pain he was feeling..."
~ should be: "feeling suicidal and wanting everyone to feel the pain he was feeling,"
:)
"until one faithful day happen."
~ did you mean "fateful"? and "happen" should be corrected to "happened."
"feeling suicidal, and wanted everyone to feel the pain he was feeling..."
~ should be: "feeling suicidal and wanting everyone to feel the pain he was feeling,"
:)
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