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senoritaburrito
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The WEbook community
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Poetry
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Language:
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Looking for quality feedback to improve your work? Carefully read and follow the rules and submit your best poetry here. Not for slackers.

If you would really like a ton of quality feedback to improve your work, and you're prepared to work to get it, then look no further. Please submit only your best work that you feel truly has a chance to "go somewhere," and read and follow the rules. Yes, to get feedback, you're going to have to give it. But we know that's how the system should work anyways, and we're just cementing the process here. So without further ado, the rules:

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celadia

10/26/2008 12:47 AM PDT

You know, I think the project leader has dropped this book. I don't see her very good critiques on poems anymore. What do you think?

Oroborus

10/22/2008 7:56 AM PDT

haven't recieved any feedback for the poem i submitted, its towards the bottom kinda in the middle of the hardy parkerson poems, its titled psychosis journals.

Oroborus

10/20/2008 11:48 PM PDT

submitted a bunch of feedback and a poem to go along with it, if it was short of ten let me know and i'll add in more. thanks

Vaughan

10/16/2008 8:08 PM PDT

new revision of another cut is up if anyone is intrested. ^.^

May_Birchcroft

10/16/2008 12:18 PM PDT

Mine's at the very bottom XD

celadia

9/19/2008 10:15 AM PDT

Hi, guys, I've re-written Angry Words, could anyone tell me what they think of it now? Is it good enough for the project?

JustJoshing

9/16/2008 8:47 PM PDT

Hey guys, not trying to be whiny or anything
I posted a poem a few days ago, and its as yet to receive more than one comment.
Its probably because it got dropped to the bottom of the scroll bar for some reason, but
if you are looking for a feedback-sparse poem
theres one waiting for ya.
Thanks

JustJoshing

9/13/2008 12:06 PM PDT

Sorry, Ive got an empty poem.
I posted it twice.
I dont know how to delete it.
Its at the bottom of the scroll bar.

senoritaburrito

9/1/2008 8:06 PM PDT

No problem, omgafilangi. But I'll be sad to see it go :(. Perhaps you could replace it w/ a new poem?

omgafilangi

9/1/2008 4:21 PM PDT

Would it be possible for you to remove my poem from this project? I've been trying to send it out to be published in a literary magazine and I'm pretty sure this could count as previous publication...

BStyles

8/30/2008 1:05 AM PDT

Seriously: It is incumbent upon you to clean this house regularly. When I see it happen it makes my efforts at review seem more worthwhile.

BStyles

8/30/2008 1:02 AM PDT

Hmmm voted off the Island. It only takes one vote on this Island :)

senoritaburrito

8/28/2008 6:17 PM PDT

XoXclintXoX's profile has been removed from the site. As he hasn't left any feedback, I have made an executive decision along with the voices in my head. He is officially out of here.

Say goodbye, everyone. My first eviction. I feel so...so...gleeful about it. Hehehe.

BStyles

8/27/2008 11:04 PM PDT

Well I am done my twenty reviews or near enough. I am thinking of another submission but will think on it for a bit.
I just want to say this has been a very rewarding experience for me so far. I see others who are gaining from it as well. I think we should keep this going it will serve us all in the end, well I think. Even the best writers need to keep in touch with an audience or risk losing touch :) I mean in the end we all hope to be read by some one and understood. Thanks to all of you for your reviews and it was a privilege reviewing all the work I reviewed.

I will continue to review here even if I decide not to submit any new material. Reviewing was the one thing that taught me the most here.

Joe

kristilee

8/26/2008 9:52 PM PDT

Cool. like it because even for as short of a time as I've been a member here, I've seen a lot of "you scratch my back I'll scratch yours" (at least looking like that) feedback, that isn't at all critical, and doesn't give the writer anything to go on to improve his/her work. I've been giving that kind of feedback, but have yet to receive any. So maybe this is the project for me.

senoritaburrito

8/25/2008 7:25 PM PDT

There are several people out there who owe major feedback...you know who you are. Please don't ruin this project for everyone else. I wanna see some constructive comments, or I'm taking away the blue gunk and might even take your submission off the project...so yeah. I don't want to be a total control freak or anything, but seriously here (luty, thomas_crow, Vaughan, ashlynn, lovely_libra, XoXclintXoX, and trinityblaque), it's not that difficult to go in and write a few helpful comments.

Drift_Bus

8/21/2008 8:58 PM PDT

[totally random comment lol]

senoritaburrito

8/21/2008 6:43 PM PDT

It's probably because I made all the cats into satay. Never fear, the blue gunk will be taking effect right about...now...

I wonder what olive oil has to do with anything.

BStyles

8/20/2008 12:51 AM PDT

We have mice?

themouth

8/19/2008 1:45 PM PDT

r u always so rule-y
cause rules are scary and follow me around measuring all i am
especially when the blue juice from under the sink takes its toll and DON'T mix that shit with hookah oR baSmAtI causse im out of olive oillllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllkvjueghuhndkjnkjnc.........................................................