Bitten Crimson

*UPDATED AND EDITED* A ghost story about an unusual gang of unusual people.....

Okay, I went over the story and re-wrote a lot of it and tweaked it beyond what it was before, so I hope you don't mind re-reading it all...the plots the same but I changed a ton of how those major events happen, and I'm happier with it. So please, re-read, I hope you enjoy the changes.
This story is about a teen girl at Halloween and how the paranormal happens to her and what she does. (Mostly vampire themed) The teen girl discovers she is meant for so much more and is a part of something bigg ... more »

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LuckyDuckling37

7/15/2009 8:47 PM PDT

Hey there. I just wanted to sincerely thank all my readers!! You have no idea how glad I am that you are reading and enjoying it. Makes me feel good. :)

I also wanted to put some major changes out there for the story and wondered if anyone had any opinions about them.....

so, as follows, I was thinking of.....

-changing Aurora's name and making her a little older
-having Hunter be blind instead of deaf (makes more sense for the way I'm heading in the plot...)
-having a new beginning (a whole sequence is planned out, it would just be a few chapters added to the beginning and then continuing right on to the present story.)
-generally editing and updating the charater's personalities

I think that's all I was thinking of for now.

please let me know what you think of these changes and any ideas, opinons, thoughts, comments, whatever!
THANKS!

~Sarah