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Blackened Rose
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It seems like you went from total despair, to deep sadness and regret to dreams of happiness as a bride. Almost a reverse order. If I read the last first then the middle then the first I can sense perhaps a failed relationship that has a broken heart in its midst. Your contnet in all three makes them very cohesive.
I voted yes and good luck
Niyahlove
http://www.webook.com/project/Pain-of-another
It seems like you went from total despair, to deep sadness and regret to dreams of happiness as a bride. Almost a reverse order. If I read the last first then the middle then the first I can sense perhaps a failed relationship that has a broken heart in its midst. Your contnet in all three makes them very cohesive.
I voted yes and good luck
Niyahlove
http://www.webook.com/project/Pain-of-another
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Loved all three of these.
Very emotive pieces that have a fine use of language and a great flowing rhythm to them. Content is also very good saying just the right amount, not an easy skill.
I will look forward to reading more of your works in the future. The very best of luck with the vote.
http://www.webook.com/project/My-3-Emotive-Entries
Very emotive pieces that have a fine use of language and a great flowing rhythm to them. Content is also very good saying just the right amount, not an easy skill.
I will look forward to reading more of your works in the future. The very best of luck with the vote.
http://www.webook.com/project/My-3-Emotive-Entries
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Nicely expressed emotions.
Quick Fix:
Was is your cruel intention -- it, not is
Quick Fix:
Was is your cruel intention -- it, not is
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White dream if my fave...
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-vote
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-vote
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Oh, yes these are very evocative. I can very much feel your pain through your word. "White Dream" really speaks out to anyone in any kind of recovery. I love it.
Excellen work, you have my vote.
If you have time:
http://www.webook.com/project/Troubled-Waters-Poetry
Excellen work, you have my vote.
If you have time:
http://www.webook.com/project/Troubled-Waters-Poetry
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I love these poems. I could actually feel your heartache. You have my vote.
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these are great, well done, good luck in the vote
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles
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Blackened Rose and Ordinary Objects are so sad, yet very descriptive. White Dream shows that all can be well again no matter what pain you might go through. I love them all! Publish!
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'But I find solace in hurt' Beautiful. A yes from me!
http://www.webook.com/project/In-Times-of-Love-There-Were
http://www.webook.com/project/In-Times-of-Love-There-Were
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