Blinded By Love

This project is just a short story I wrote in my spare time. It is 100% fantasy and fiction.

Ana Maines is a young girl living on the island of Idonno. When tragedy overtakes her, she decides to flee to the distant military camp on the other side of the island. Her island is overcome with civil war due to the Sunnisian race being freed from exile and living with the Idonnese. On her journey, Ana meets Imogene-a Sunnisian girl traveling home to the desert of Banse.
During her journey, Ana reflects on her life, her lost loves, and questions whether she can pursue a friendship with Imog ... more »

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May_Birchcroft

7/24/2008 9:13 AM PDT

Very good story. I've just finished it.

May_Birchcroft

7/24/2008 9:07 AM PDT

When i said "to this chapter" i meant the first one, because that's all i had read. I liked this one, too (the 2nd one)

May_Birchcroft

7/24/2008 8:58 AM PDT

Good ending to this chapter! You've got me hooked! All I can say is that you have a tendancy to use short and sharp senteces. Try to use a bit more variety.
On the whole this is very good.