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Born of The Sun
These are the poems I choose to submit for voting,A story of the child of the sun.
Fighting the odds,and building my life with a Pen.
They can burn my books but I cant let them touch my pen...
Fighting the odds,and building my life with a Pen.
They can burn my books but I cant let them touch my pen...
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Very intelligent and thoughtful.
Best of luck!
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul
Best of luck!
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul
This is something that many people can relate to now. Your words describe your pain and make me feel the pain for everyone that has lost for the same type of reason. These are hard to read and touch the heart probably of anyone who reads. I hope your pen gives you relief.
NIyah
NIyah
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This is really great work! You have my vote, good luck!
http://www.webook.com/project/Troubled-Waters-Poetry
http://www.webook.com/project/Troubled-Waters-Poetry
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You have a gift with words, the flow of your poems is so great it makes it very easy to read and enjoyable! great job!
http://www.webook.com/project/Reminiscences
http://www.webook.com/project/Reminiscences
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Good work. Good luck. You've got my vote.
http://www.webook.com/project/penbuddys-best-3-poems
Peace and goodwill...
http://www.webook.com/project/penbuddys-best-3-poems
Peace and goodwill...
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Great poetry! I hope you get your poetry published!!!!!!
Thanks for voting for mine!
Thanks for voting for mine!
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Your poems are unique and meaningful
"Turning saints to Killers,brothers to dealers"
Deep
I like them, Thanks for voting my friend.
Here's my vote
"Turning saints to Killers,brothers to dealers"
Deep
I like them, Thanks for voting my friend.
Here's my vote
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The pen truly is mightier than the sword -- it captures images and communicates hopes, dreams, and fears.
In future posts, larger font would help readers, like me, read your words more easily.
In future posts, larger font would help readers, like me, read your words more easily.
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Great work.... very strong.....Good luck!
If you have time....
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-of-my-best-Poems
If you have time....
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-of-my-best-Poems
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you have an interesting style, so much to think about with each sentence. I really enjoyed the 3rd poem,
'My Pen Is'
i would say YES!!!!!!! to publish.
good luck in the voting process and take care,
tuesday_rayne
'My Pen Is'
i would say YES!!!!!!! to publish.
good luck in the voting process and take care,
tuesday_rayne
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excellent piece, I really like the thinking and positive outlook of afro on afro. deserves a yes vote.
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These are very powerful poems and one can onlt write this strongly if one believes in that which they are writing about.
Very well done and the very best of luck with the vote.
Very well done and the very best of luck with the vote.
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These are powerful poems about the trials and sufferings of a people from the land where all humanity is thought to have been born. The references to native language, to the sad truths of intertribal wars, to the difficulty of blending in in the lands of the West, where differences are a liability. The style flows freely, with a rhyming pattern that comes and goes at will, like the many faces of pain. The use of alliteration in many areas unifies the concepts and it gives the poems a musical feel. I like the rawness, the honesty. Each one excels in different areas, but "My Pen Is..." definitely surpasses the other two in imagery, depth of concepts, its relevance to today's world--which is emphasized by allusion to contemporary themes like Harry Potter--and the hope that this "Pen" symbolizes. Beautiful work. A yes to publish!
If you have time:
http://www.webook.com/project/josafatPoetryVote209
If you have time:
http://www.webook.com/project/josafatPoetryVote209
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