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Project Leader:
naiveandwitty
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The WEbook community -
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All Participants -
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General -
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English
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Cathartic Awakening! Therapeutic Identification! (Part II Because the Healing is Forever!)
Remember that you are loved. And many without a voice are presently, and have, experienced your pain. We are not alone! Thus, share with the masses! This may help them to break free. Plus, it helps us!
This is the link to the first project: http://www.webook.com/project/Cathartic-Awakening-Therapeutic-Identification
Both Poems and Short Stories encouraged!
This is the link to the first project: http://www.webook.com/project/Cathartic-Awakening-Therapeutic-Identification
Both Poems and Short Stories encouraged!
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All is fare in Life and love as It is in death and war
It is what it is nothing less nothing more
Life is like an addict lusting for more.
Stumbling through darkness you try not fall
Seeking out right in the wrong of it all.
Does it feel like the best does it feel like the worst
Both freedom and containment feel like a curse.
No limit leads you to aimless action
that’s the freedom which brings destruction
Chained to commitment rules and judgment
Leaves you no room for spontaneous enjoyment.
Life is what you make it. So make it what you like it
It’s all up to you you don’t have to fight it
So give it your best , live life like a dance
you never know this might be your last chance
Seems like forever but forever wont be long
One day my dear friend your free will, be gone.
Today has been born, tomorrow yet to come
The choices you make should not leave you torn
Give to your brother your sister and your mother
And never forget your father and your lover
Live life lovely and live in love
The most powerful gift sent from above.
It is what it is nothing less nothing more
Life is like an addict lusting for more.
Stumbling through darkness you try not fall
Seeking out right in the wrong of it all.
Does it feel like the best does it feel like the worst
Both freedom and containment feel like a curse.
No limit leads you to aimless action
that’s the freedom which brings destruction
Chained to commitment rules and judgment
Leaves you no room for spontaneous enjoyment.
Life is what you make it. So make it what you like it
It’s all up to you you don’t have to fight it
So give it your best , live life like a dance
you never know this might be your last chance
Seems like forever but forever wont be long
One day my dear friend your free will, be gone.
Today has been born, tomorrow yet to come
The choices you make should not leave you torn
Give to your brother your sister and your mother
And never forget your father and your lover
Live life lovely and live in love
The most powerful gift sent from above.
My best to you and yours, I pray your work will be published!
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Great writers around the world in a day, so to speak. well done to all,good luck!
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Well written poetry. This is not my cup of tea, because I look for uplifting manuscripts, but it is worthy of publication for those who do like this type of poetry.
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Great wrokmy friend i did not know about this project good luck
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I read each piece and LOVE the whole anthology! Thank you again for your words of wisdom and good luck with your success!
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Naturally you have my YES VOTE. Your books are all fabulous.
Thank you for letting me be a part of them.
Liz
Thank you for letting me be a part of them.
Liz
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So-so many great choices here, will make a great volume of poetry. My vote yes.
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You are a very good writer I love your style. I voted for you please vote for my book "King Loverr: Diary of a Philosophical Loner.
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Healing for EVERYONE...
May its publication bring the
conception of Part III -- Cathartic Awakenings &
Healed through Healthy Laughter...!
WRITE ON...!
May its publication bring the
conception of Part III -- Cathartic Awakenings &
Healed through Healthy Laughter...!
WRITE ON...!
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Mahalo for the invite. I will have to pass this time around...am so new that I would like to enjoy reading for now...thanks, again...:)
Dear Naiveandwitty
Sadly I am withdrawing from this project. Currently I am working on a novel which is a very time consuming process and I have set a deadline for myself to finish it by the end of this year and hopefully get it published. All the very best with your project and I will be checking it out from time to time.
Sincerely,
Helen
Sadly I am withdrawing from this project. Currently I am working on a novel which is a very time consuming process and I have set a deadline for myself to finish it by the end of this year and hopefully get it published. All the very best with your project and I will be checking it out from time to time.
Sincerely,
Helen
thnks for the invite too
is cathartic anything to do with the cathars ? i`m just wondering because i don`t know whot it means :S lol
is cathartic anything to do with the cathars ? i`m just wondering because i don`t know whot it means :S lol
Please EDIT your entries time and again. This is the nature of the writer. Rough Drafts are unacceptable; especially, if YOU, the writer, are serious about getting your work published. Thus, I ask that you bring your best to the table, or do not bring anything at all. Anything less is a SIN.
And it is not my intention to sound overbearing. I have conditioned myself as well. If I have written something, and you find a flaw therein, bring it to my attention. I will correct the perceived flaw, or I will explain myself.
And it is not my intention to sound overbearing. I have conditioned myself as well. If I have written something, and you find a flaw therein, bring it to my attention. I will correct the perceived flaw, or I will explain myself.
Thank you so much for the invitation. I hope that I will be able to make a worthy contribution to your project
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Thank you for the invite. I need to see if any of what I have is up to this caliber of writing...
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thanks for the invite. I don't write much poetry, but it doesn't mean I can't appreciate it.
I will tag along and see if I can learn something.
I will tag along and see if I can learn something.
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lets hope your words twin with your pain... So you may heal some, or meny wounds some ones dagger has left on your poor soul and limp body...
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Hmm, I have this poem that I just wrote that's not necessarily brutally honest, but it has to do with a topic that is hard to be brutally honest about and is something that often keeps us fettered to the chains of misery.
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