Clips and Cuts

Short horror stories that cut to the chase

I'm hacking away at an opportunity to get my short stories out there. In fact, the little ones are just screaming to be heard. I have to cut the little darlings up, make them short, but small things yield big surprises. So here's a little taste of my writing, and I hope you've brought your nerve.

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jhume

9/8/2008 8:23 PM PDT

Ok, I'm back. I just love "Whenever you Come Around!" Apparently Part I and Part II are so big you had to split them up. Understandable. This guy is good, real good. I think he needs to fix up his stories a bit--clean them up-- but he can tell a good story.
Keep it up, Eric!

jhume

9/1/2008 6:49 AM PDT

Here's an upcoming writer I have every confidence will put out some interestig work. I think his shirt story, The Chair, has lots of promise, potential and great writing. There's a breath of genius in his work. But, like many things, I think he should try to focus on his endings, even though this on is really good. Also, he needs to fix the story to be readable. Great story.
The Touch is just eerie! Along the lines of King, Barker, and even Laymon, I think he again shows us a different view of the Vampire genre, one filled with mistrust, paranoid behavior and personal terrors. is there really monsters, or are they all made up? I see where's he going, but again, focus on the endings a little. I would like to see more and I hope we see more from John E. Ware.