UPDATE: Volume 2 is now closed! We have reached 50 submissions!!! I am considering a Volume 3, but not until I finish this last semester at University. I'll be letting everyone know and I promise to catch up on the last few submissions here as well. Remember, event though the project is closed to new submissions, you can still read, rate, and review everyone's work :)

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UPDATE: Volume 2 is now closed! We have reached 50 submissions!!! I am considering a Volume 3, but not until I finish this last semester at University. I'll be letting everyone know and I promise to catch up on the last few submissions here as well. Remember, event though the project is closed to new submissions, you can still read, rate, and review everyone's work :)

Critiques are an essential part of writing. They help us grow as writers, revealing elements we are unable to see ourselves.

PLEASE visit Volume 1 by following this link...Remember, you can still read, rate and give feedback on Volume 1's fantastic 50 titles!

http://www.webook.com/project/Complimentary-Critiques

PLEASE!: Read the notes and rules FIRST! Thank you.

MY OWN WORK: I will not be posting any of my own work on this project, but some friends insisted I at least post the links for anyone who is interested. Thank you for any feedback. It will always be returned with equal vigor!

My Poetry:

"Never Throw Away Your Homework"
http://www.webook.com/project/Never-Throw-Away-Your-Homework

My Novels:

"Loyalty Lies"
~*~In a world where women are taught to be silent one girl dares to speak. Maura O'Quinn, a 19th century English debutante, has been fighting for her own independence ever since the death of her mother, but after her family moves to Ireland she may very well be fighting for the independence of an entire country.

Across the sea, in a world where the meaning of Irish is a disinherited people, Tiernan Rafferty joins a secret society of brothers to reclaim the country that was stolen from his people by the English. But will his fight for his country lead him to the only person who can challenge his own beliefs.

When their two worlds collide what is to stop the beating of their different hearts and prevent the two from discovering a life they once never imagined could be with each other?.~*~
http://www.webook.com/project/A-Year-of-Seasons

"Unclaimed Darkness"
~*~In the very near future, the world has literally fallen into darkness, the city has been bordered up and Talis Dodson is surrounded by stangers. Some will become her allies, others will try to kill her, but she'll face them all to save her brother and escape the chaos.~*~
http://www.webook.com/project/Imminent-Darkness-Working-Title

"The House of Breathing Dolls"
~*~The United States was once nothing more than a country of business transactions. Sadly, that never changed. Jocelyn's great-great-grandmother was kindnapped, reprogrammed to forget her previous life and made to live another. She was the first Doll the House ever made. Now, Jocelyn, as a part of her great-great-grandmother's legacy, has been given to the House to become a fifth generation Doll, born to become a wife, a slave and a bearer of the next generation. But that's not exactly what she has in mind. She deems to be the last Doll the House ever sees fit to make.~*~
http://www.webook.com/project/The-House-of-Breathing-Dolls

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