My Pants is almost dr Suess like and very cute.
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Good work. Voted.

And if you have time...

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Great Poems. Well Done.

And if you have time...

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you flow between voices easily. i can definitely tell the age differences in each speaker from poem to poem.

Good luck!

Enjoyed all three of your poems. A Yes vote from me.

You deserve to get published.  I so enjoyed this piece - here's my vote

You're a true poet, Liza. I vote publish.

nice work, uniquely Liza reminded me of my own daughter who is now 20 and out on her own, my pants would not unzip reminded me of my own school days, all three were well written I voted yes

'Uniquely Liza' is great. Your daughter is lucky to have a mom who writes so well.

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good writing i enjoyed these, good luck



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Three good poems. Best of luck, you have my vote.

All three are very good pieces, good luck!
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3 Very different but all good

you are a great artist through and through.

Great poetry, hope you do well in the vote!

General:
I have to agree with Nrhatch in the fact that your poems are very personal. They do tell interesting stories, but sometimes I found it hard to relate. It's almost like when people have 'in jokes' which you find difficult to understand.

Form:
I feel that a liitle bit of work needs to be done on the form of your first two poems as they rhyme seems to not quite flow in places.
I found the third poem a bit too solid and I feel that this could be broken down with either line breaks or punctuation.

Content:
I like the variety of your content.
You obviously write from personal experience and you are inspired well.

Imagery:
The first poem delivers the sense reminisance well and I can understand the sentimentality.
I like the comical imagery of the second poem and I think you have created the image of the story very well.
You have gone more indepth into the imagery of the third poem and I feel that if this is broken up a bit more, it would work very well.

General:
Nice variety of subject matters, but all three seem a bit "personal."  As a result, the average reader may have a tough time relating to them.



Content:
I felt for your granddaughter, stuck in the bathroom with wet pants, ashamed to come out.  Poor wee thing!

Musicality:
The image of pants refusing to unsnap is good, but the cadence and rhythm are off a bit.  For example, some lines have 9 syllables, and others have only 4, making it hard for the reader to get into the flow of the poem.

Good luck!

Loved uniquely liza. Hope you get all the votes you deserve.. Good job.

Good work, voted:-)

Three very good poems - a yes vote.
Best wishes,
Mike.

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