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Dark
Dark is a place, a strange place, but Dun calls it home.
Safe with his family and too young to leave he's always been happy there.
And curiosity, is dangerous.
But life is never that simple.
Safe with his family and too young to leave he's always been happy there.
And curiosity, is dangerous.
But life is never that simple.
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10/30/2009 8:24 PM PDT
Hmm, intresting!
9/13/2009 1:46 PM PDT
This is very intriguing, dark and thrilling. I also agree; if you get a picture up, you'll draw in more readers. I'll check this out and see what I think of it. Well done for grabbing my attention.
9/7/2009 1:00 PM PDT
interesting. i do agree with trozin and Itarielle, you should get a pic to attract more readers!
8/29/2009 6:57 AM PDT
this is very eye-catching. but like trozin said, you might want to get a picture to get more readers. this is a very good story line. sounds a little like my book. :)
2/25/2009 9:22 PM PST
Actually I have to strongly agree with roars_in_public( cool name by the way). The bold printed blurb and the short catchy little attention getter is perfect. What I would like to see though, and this might just be me, is a cover for your book. It's not like it takes away from your craft as a writer, but sometimes the cover can set a mood for the book, at least it does for me.
~t.
~t.
8/23/2008 8:43 AM PDT
Neat intro~
It's a wonderful vague thing that leaves you thirsting for info.
-rushes to first chapter-
It's a wonderful vague thing that leaves you thirsting for info.
-rushes to first chapter-
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