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Sci Fi/Fantasy
Teen -
Language:
English
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Dark City
This is about a fourteen year old boy named Maxwell who is the Prince of a planet called Rosinia but he doesn't want to be King. Just as he runs away with his friend Alex and an android named 354, his planet is declared war on by another planet resulting in a dangerous journey for him.
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11/15/2008 6:51 PM PST
A fantasy world, princes, princesses and an android. Exactly my taste.
11/12/2008 11:40 AM PST
Pretty good stuff. He surely is a typical teenager. Wha wha wha poor me! lol, I can see where he's coming from though. I was there at one time. I love the writing, the reader really gets to get into the main character's head. Good job with this, and I wish you the best of luck.
11/10/2008 8:38 AM PST
Interesting work, good luck
11/8/2008 12:24 PM PST
A good story - some of the narration is a little inconsistent but nothing overly concerning. Wishing you luck.
11/7/2008 11:24 AM PST
good work... the revisions shall come.
11/5/2008 12:02 PM PST
not bad, but I agree with totalbatty, it needs a bit of revision, and there are a few grammatical issues, but I like it, so I voted for it!
11/5/2008 8:08 AM PST
Promising but needs more revisions.
11/4/2008 5:14 PM PST
awesome writing please vote for me back
7/26/2008 7:58 PM PDT
I enjoyed reading your story and how the Prince fell asleep and saw himself in the papers. You tell a good story and you are a very good writer. My Vote is with you. Please check out my site and see what you think.
I would like to welcome you to check out my novel 'A Chosen Journey.' You may find it on page 4 or 5 of Health, Body and Mind under Projects. If you enjoy it please leave a Vote. Thank you very much. Sincerely, Tamara0449
I would like to welcome you to check out my novel 'A Chosen Journey.' You may find it on page 4 or 5 of Health, Body and Mind under Projects. If you enjoy it please leave a Vote. Thank you very much. Sincerely, Tamara0449
7/25/2008 5:07 AM PDT
I only read the first chapter but I've heard this story before. I didn't see anything new to make me want to read on.
7/20/2008 6:50 AM PDT
Enjoyed the writing style. And the happy ending. Good Luck!
7/20/2008 4:26 AM PDT
I like the writing style a lot, sort of has a Jim butcher feel to it.
7/19/2008 10:28 PM PDT
Hmm... I like the idea and I like the way the story is going. I have really nothing to ramble about...
7/19/2008 2:10 PM PDT
This is an excellent story!
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