Book Info
-
Project Leader:
Mrs_BillKaulitz
-
Participants:
The WEbook community -
Who Can Write:
Project Leader Only -
Category:
Poetry -
Genre:
General -
Language:
English
book_central
Devlin's Love Poems
My three best/favored poems from my project "Love and Life Poems". These are poems I have written when dealing with struggles in my love life, including the one titled "Spring Garden". I ended things with someone who made me feel that way and when it happened a second time with someone else I was able to look back and see how this poem relates even more to this other person I ended things with.
"Who's Love?" is about my best friend who told me after I expressed my feelings to someone who liked ... more »
"Who's Love?" is about my best friend who told me after I expressed my feelings to someone who liked ... more »
GIVE FEEDBACK
I love the opening line of "Spring Garden."
Other than that, this collection seems very superficial. It needs more depth. Perhaps use more imagery and don't restrict yourself to rhyme.
Good luck!
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul
Other than that, this collection seems very superficial. It needs more depth. Perhaps use more imagery and don't restrict yourself to rhyme.
Good luck!
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul
Good Luck with the vote.
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition
If you have the time.
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition
If you have the time.
excellent i loved them, you have my vote, good luck
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles
i say yes!!!!!!!
If you want to find mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you.
If you want to find mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you.
yes yes yes yes yes yes....I would go on but....
Beautiful writing and hearfelt stories behind them.
Good luck!
Beautiful writing and hearfelt stories behind them.
Good luck!
All three poems are worthy of print. I really found the style, the tone and the imagery both intriguing and unique. There is great originality, creativity in these pieces. Good luck to you. You've got my vote.
Start Reading
more » Poems
top
jump
more » Poems
bottom
jump





Become a fan
Follow us
Become a fan