Inspiring and captivating. I loved your descriptions and the way you drew us in with the switching time frames. Keep it up!

Do you paint? You seem to like writing about that subject a lot. Or any form of art.

I think you would really relate to my poem "Reflections of You" I hope you have time to read it.  Thanks.  I want to read more of you.

Right. I'm here. Just get a cup of t and I'll dive in ;-).
Liking the new avatar btw. :-)

definetly going to read this!

The Conception of Perception

Sounds awesome. I am definitely going to read it.

Good luck with NaNo

"Morpheus' Canvas" - Morpheus being the God of dreams and able to take human form in people's dreams

I really dont know if this would sound good but i do believe it could be change to ...In the eyes of a dreamer or in the eyes of a painter

I have devoured this story through chapter 12 with rapt attention - oblivious to the time - and now I must leave for a class. But, it has captivated me and enthralled me, and I look forward to reading more of it. Wonderful story that speaks to my heart!

Sounds very intriguing and different. Will find the time to check it out

awesome. thanks for the invite. can't wait to read.

Thanks for the invite. I have read the prologue and I must say, I like what I see. I love the imagery  of the burned body, puts me in mind of spontaneous human combustion.

The part where you explain the previous 'odd' deaths needs a little work. Too many mentions of the window in quick succession makes it feel a little clunky. I would have liked the the old woman death the be a bit more ironic as well. I do wonder, being old, how she got the bricks up there in the first place?

I am looking forward to reading the rest of it. You have posed a lot of questions to the reader. A brief look at chapter 2 seems to see a change from 3rd person to 1st. Maybe a little more infor about the police is needed, not sure yet.

You differently have a writing talent.

thank you for the invite ... this will be a great for everyone has Dreams

Jan-

Your teaser and intro are spot on!  They are written in a way that virtually compels the reader forward into the landscape of your dreams.  Awesome. 

I shall follow the pull of your words forward.  ;-)  nancy

Fantastic ! A well woven tale.

Great blurb

I am new to this site and have a couple of questions.

1.  What is NaNoWriMo?

and

2.  You wrote this novel in just 16 days?  WTF?!?!?!?

I am starting chapter 4 and am totally engrossed!  You are my hero GranisGrazin!

Jan I am in awe of the fact that you wrote a complete novel in 16 days.  A novel, I might add, of more than 97 THOUSAND words (these days the average commercial novel is about 70 thousand words).  Not only did you do it quickly, but from what I've read (admittedly only about half so far), it's a VERY GOOD ONE. Amazing work!  Congratulations to you!

He lives a dream and only in death will he be awakened. So let death be the birth.Has if there is life after death then there must be life before birth.  THE LADY IS WAITING

'Once the brush tatses the paint and on the canvas starts to color, the images take their own life, as you will soon discover'

This is one of the most tantalising projects on here!

If dreams could be painted, if paintings could live...what would a world become?

By God, this statement just rocked my entire being! I haven't even begun reading the story and I've already found myself in love. I read this simple statement, and I find myself on the verge of tears, it strikes my core like a smith striking the red hot metal against an anvil. I find myself questioning my entire being. I don't know why, I won't try to understand it, but this statement, it's so simple, yet so beautiful...

Onwards and upwards, Jan.

Good luck with this.

This is an impressive literally work.
I look forward to this work being published.

Wow GranisGrazin, You've started a very good one here.

Ooohhh, that gives me chill bumps!

Sounds like the beginning of a good tale.  "If dreams could be painted, if paintings could live"  sounds like this would make a wonderful first line of a poem, hmmmmm

Good hook.  You have me interested.

Good choice!  Counting down.  We start at midnight (local time) on Friday.