Greetings,

Thank you for this platform. I would like to become a good writter, reporter. This is a link which will help me i think.

Will I find Films scripts writters and editor? This my thirst project here.

Thanks
J.claude KAMWENUBUSA

For those who are unaware, I plan on self-publishing this work of art. Please place your name on your work and edit it to the best of your ability. If for any reason you do not wish for your work to be published in this collection, just remove it by clicking the remove button on the page of your submission. It has been a great privilege to work in collaboration with each of you. You each bring to this project artistry and individuality.

I greatly appreciate all the energy and support you bring to the table. I believe that we all feed off of such energies. I will open this project up for more entries. This project is fairly well manicured—therefore, the editing part is practically done. I will only have to iron out all the kinks—and remove a few pieces. But it is my goal to keep everyone’s work included in this edition of “Edited Free Verse.”

i will work on this tonight and tomorrow-- It is revised already-- just some further detailing.  Also, I have some other pieces if you are interested in looking at them for this body of work.. Mark
I think you are an inspiration, for me at least in perseverance.  I have had a very warm and welcomed experience so far, and a great deal is to do with you.. thx

I must admit: when I read your work, I am searching for mistakes. Thereafter, I take into account the work in itself. Please, if you are just writing and posting with little or no regard for craft, post elsewhere. It is a waste of our time to point out to you obvious mistakes.

Complete Passion, Artistry, Stories and Poetic Prose!
Complete Passion, Artistry, Stories and Poetic Prose!
Complete Passion, Artistry, Stories and Poetic Prose!
Complete Passion, Artistry, Stories and Poetic Prose!


when you create a work of art--you will know it--because your head will ache.

Spell Check--this too is part of Editing.
I cannot emphasis this enough.

By the way, I agree about the editing thing.
Poetry loses something when you can't read it.

Well I just submitted a random freeverse I just finished.
So sharpen those red pencils and come after me. :)

So what do I think I am going to accomplish as a "Writer". Put, Semi colons around it-like I know what it means?

To Write.
Is it an, compulsion, that drives, drives out your bones. Is it blatant, whipping at the head nodding, when you say you write?
Is it anything, is alright?

Until tHEN.

Thanks for the invite, but I'm not big on editing verse.

I tend to go more for the straight from the gut prose with minimal editing.

I will definitely pop in to look around and review though.

thx for the invite im try my best dude

naiveandwitty, I don't blame you. You are never mean, you just try to help and thank you for that. As for me, I have never tried poetic prose but I have taken a shot at it here. Because of that, I appreciate you giving me straight feedback! How will I ever learn if no one points out my mistakes?

if you are just sketching and writing what may come, post elsewhere!!!!!!!!!!!!

it can get down right brutal in here. please only come with thick skin. I refuse to lie to anyone. and I expect the same.

posted in the wrong spot....

this is not poetic prose. it really isn’t. also, no art or rhythm was put into this. read some of the others here. not mine, but people like Audn,  AngelaKumpolt. Allie_Marie and Amber7151—their work is deliberate and thought out. I think that you have taken something for granted. Many do! writing of any genre is a craft. please put more time into your work. it represents you. lastly, look up poetic prose. you will see what I am referring to.

ty for the invite!!! and i think i have an idea in mind....

thanks for the invite but I am very busy and have alot of projects going on at the moment.

thanks for the invite :) To be honest I don`t really know how to edit my work but i`ll give it a try :)

Thanks for the invite - but I am overextended as it is

I'm proud to be here, and I'm proud to feel - or have felt - under your wing, Glenn.

And I think I owe you an apology for stupid, useless feedback I offered.

Why apology here and not via message with you personally? Just one thing: You're a great writer, a wise reviewer and an excellent editor; I want everyone to know that.

hello
thanks for the invite, I have some translated stories of Hispanic writers that deal with mystery and suspense, are these ok to include here??
please let me know, thanks
chord0

wat am i supposed to write??? but ty for inviting anyways =)

Thanks for the invitation. I don't know if I'll have time to contribute, but I'll do my best.

if I read your work, and I see that is was obviously not edited, I will delete it.

all I ask for is that you edit your work. say whatever you want, but have pride in your work. this is not high school. we are grown intellectuals. so edit your work.

Although I will not be submitting this project during this cycle, I have opened it up to the community. if we each continue to point out each others flaws when possible, things should go well.

Where's everyone?...?

Thank you for the invitation, I am delighted to be here.

not lost, but loss.

As a rule of thumb, if we as a group decide that enough time has lapsed, and thus, a person has been given ample opportunity to edit an entry, and that person in question refuses to do such, either out of spite or sheer disinterest, then that particular entry will be removed until the editing has been completed.

When something of this nature occurs, I will simply post the following question in the comments box of the work in question: “Do we each agree that this artist has had enough time to edit this work”?

Each member will then give their feedback. If everyone says Yes, then that work in question will be removed from the project. (I will simply say that this work needs to be edited.) 

In addition, and I say this with caution, if you as the writer are at a lost, ask me for assistance on a completed work, and I will edit your work to the best of my ability and post it in the comments section of the entry in question. But keep in mind, if I or others do such, this takes away from your individuality. Thus, the best thing to do is, walk through your pieces cautiously, and construct your sentences deliberately. Until the skill is somewhat developed, I advise that we each avoid overly complex sentences.  

Please! And I say this sternly: do not use me to construct Your work. I will only assist as best I can those who are obviously trying hard to put forth their best work.

Lastly, I realize that not everyone needs assistance, but if one does, just ask us.

Thank you for allowing me to join this project. I am trying to continually practicing the art of non-attachment, therefore please feel free to leave brutally honest feedback and constructive critiques so that I may improve my works. Thank you!

Just a heads up: I ask that none of us take to heart the reviews that our fellow colleagues leave on our post. The goal is to edit as best we can. Thus, all feedback is appreciated: not merely the rosy kind.
Lastly, I appreciate what I have seen. If we submit a somewhat flawless submission, this increases our chances of being picked.

Yeah, I agree with naiveandwitty.

I've been here for not so long and I've come across pretty much new knowledge to me.

Which is precisely what keeps me here. I love it.

Dimension, your openness is amazing. Please, always feel comfortable with leaving a post here. It is truly refreshing. I believe that we all feel the same.

Oops- I'm slippin'- advice, not avise.  Man, I instantly saw that mistake...see what you'll all be dealing with? lol

I am thrilled to be invited here.  I'm among people who have way more experience with poetry than me, so I can get advise, hopefully!  I'm putting up a poem now that is very close to my heart, but is pretty radical in the view of poetry.  Some say it's too confusing, while others like it, but I know it is in trouble deep down, so some help would be appreciated.  Even with professional help, I feel at a loss:(

By the way, I hope that starting off like this is ok...if not, then please give me a quick reply(preferably naiveandwity:))!  Thanks.

I feel honored to be part of this project! Thank you!

Let us make this project a great one.

The ideal is that we write of captured moments in time. Edit them to the best of our ability. And imbue them with passion and artistry. So in essence, the project will consist of constructed free verses, short stories, prose and poetic prose.