Book Info
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Project Leader:
MichelleR
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The WEbook community -
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Category:
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Genre:
Horror
Thriller/Suspense -
Language:
English
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Enveloped in Darkness
1485 in a Wallochian forest, a small village is laid to waste as the remaining survivors are herded to awaiting Spanish slave ships harbored in the Aegean Sea off the coast of Constantinople. With the Inn keeper dead, he is unable to fulfill his oath given to a Mongol Horde years ago, to protect and keep a special young slave girl until their return in the times of death, plagues and pestilence that now run rampant in the land. Demons and vile creatures arise and congregate at an alarming numbe
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I agree with the previous comment, however, I feel you're cramming too much into this synopsis. When i look at the back or inside cover of a book i want a vague but intriguing outline, it also has to be relatively short as with too much information you can give away too much of the plot and thus making me not see the point in reading any more of the story. tighten it up, make it shorter and snappier to grab a readers attention and hold it from the offset. that aside the last paragraph should be kept as is because it builds the excitement. :-)
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