Nice work about the streets mike Needs more votes

I think you have some great comparisons here, but your writing style seems a little choppy and to me that is where it gets confusing sometimes with the direction you are trying to take.  In my opinion only, if you worked on making your words flow a little more smoothly together, I think you could develop something great.

I would like to invite you to review my novel 'A Chosen Journey.' The novel is about a young woman named Jenna and her dog Sam who are abused by her husband. She is beaten nearly to death when divine intervention steps in and she rebounds miracuously. She leaves John and Sam behind to go to a Woman's Shelter and finds herself working in the Community Hospital with young adults that are addicted to drugs and alcohol. I promise that you will find this story creative and captivating. You may find it on page 5 of Health, Mind and Body under Projects. Please click on the stars until they turn orange to Vote for it if you find it deserving. Thank you, Sincerely, Tamara0449

You know a good poet when they can write about any subject and make it rhyme. You are a great poet and expect to see more of your work. I give you five stars. Tamara0449

These are really good. Good luck!!

I really enjoyed some of these!  Good Luck!

Great job and good luck!

Your poetry, Mr. Paul, when simply put: It flows. It is that song you listen to that has all its ups and downs but still it flows. You have breathed life into these poems, letting the words lift off the pages and flow through the reader like water. I see life, at its purest and most gentle and at its most sinister and tragic. You have done brilliantly and I commend your work. Thank you for your submissions. They were beautifully done. My favorites were "What Are We Here For?", "I Still Remeber Walt Whitman" and "Numbness As Control." Three very differnt pieces and yet such power each holds. I again thank you for your submissions.