Book Info
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Project Leader:
philohern
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Participants:
The WEbook community -
Who Can Write:
All Participants -
Category:
Fiction -
Genre:
General -
Language:
English
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First Line
"It was the best of times, it was the worst of times..."~ Charles Dickens. "Call me Ishmael."~ Herman Melville. "There's a certain slant of light..."~ Emily Dickenson. The first line of any story or poem is the most important one. In this project, with feedback from others, you can perfect that opening line.
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Dear fellow WeBook members below are just a few ideas I quickly wrote hope they help much love and peace Emily xo
She dipped her feet into the cool river leaning over she saw her reflection it was a betrayal of herself no amount of new clothes and hair dye could make up for the lie she was now living on the run from the law, accused of a murder one she was innocent of....
Dear Jason,
The nights grow long without you here I miss you tell me what it is like for you over there? stay strong i'll be waiting, I love you.....
"QUICK" I turned around before being thrown to the ground I got to my feet and turned around to face the man ready to attack "what the hell is your problem are you trying to get me killed?"......
She dipped her feet into the cool river leaning over she saw her reflection it was a betrayal of herself no amount of new clothes and hair dye could make up for the lie she was now living on the run from the law, accused of a murder one she was innocent of....
Dear Jason,
The nights grow long without you here I miss you tell me what it is like for you over there? stay strong i'll be waiting, I love you.....
"QUICK" I turned around before being thrown to the ground I got to my feet and turned around to face the man ready to attack "what the hell is your problem are you trying to get me killed?"......
This Feedback was...
I kept running, and running my feet pounding hard on the pavement rain pelting down I couldn't breathe but I had to keep going he was after me, they wanted me I could never escape them they were in the shadows of the night. Always watching, always waiting I could never be free not until I broke free of this curse..
(that is more an opening paragraph then an opening sentence)
(that is more an opening paragraph then an opening sentence)
Please check this project frequently because some of us will be changing our lines according to feedback.
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