Out of all of these, "Pass" is my favorite because I have always been somewhat obsessed by the uncontrollable passing of time and the short time we all have here.  Smooth flow, good use of words.  Im not a poet by nature, but I know what I like and these poems are the kind of poetry I would carry around with me or have on my shelf to share with others.

i sit beside your words they guide, through the darkest places into the light

Nicely done.  As I said in reviews of some of the other poetry projects, if you want a published book of poems, you probably need more than 25 - 30 poems.  Keep writing!  ;-D

You have a very nice collection of poetry here, i've taken the time to read them all and they are wonderfully expressive.  I've noticed almost all of your poems rhyme,  I think i'd like to hear some poetry from you which simply states what it is.  What I mean by that is that i'd like to see poetry which doesn't look like typical poetry in the sense that it rhymes but rather poetry in the sense that it evokes a deep emotion without rhyming.  You've wrote some fantastic stuff here and i'm curious to see what you write in the future.