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Ghost Image
Harper Coleridge is a painter who has it all backwards. Harper is a portrait painter able to render so exquisitely that eyes seem to dance, dewy moist lips seem to actually smile, breath itself is in the product of her brushstrokes. Yet her portraits are of no one she has ever physically seen. They speak volumes of intimate secrets about their subjects, yet Harper has never met those subjects. Nor has anyone else she knows. Harper paints the faces of those who come to her in her dreams. The
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8/8/2009 4:47 PM PDT
it caught my eye...keep writing!!!
8/7/2009 3:36 PM PDT
Very good teaser...
I'll be reading.
~t.
I'll be reading.
~t.
8/3/2009 3:02 PM PDT
So far, I have read the first 3 chapters, and you have reeled me in! Very intriguing! :)
7/31/2009 8:42 AM PDT
I wouldnt change a thing we each have our seperate styles and yours is very engaging. Keep it up great read.
7/31/2009 1:49 AM PDT
Harper Coleridge is a ARTIST who has it all backwards. Harper is a portrait painter able to render THE CANVAS exquisitely. HER eyes seem to dance, dewy moist lips seem to smile, breath itself is in the product of her brushstrokes. YET THE SUBJECT OF HER PORTRAITS HAVE NEVER BEEN SEEN. They speak of intimate secrets, SECRETS UNKNOWN. Harper paints THE IMAGES THAT FLOOD her dreams. Then, and only then, DOES she discover HER DEPTH WITH such breathtaking accuracy.
Tighten it up; less is better.
Tighten it up; less is better.
7/31/2009 12:02 AM PDT
Cool
^=^
^=^
7/26/2009 8:42 AM PDT
To see the face of one you have never met , is great gift and at times a curse, love the way your work comes to life
7/25/2009 11:05 AM PDT
That sounds so cool! I'll have to find time to read your book!
7/23/2009 2:20 AM PDT
sounds interesting!
7/17/2009 7:52 PM PDT
I'm well into Chapter 70+ and still enjoying it.
Not so good feedback:
It needs a polished edit.
Some small things like sentence structure, quotation marks that are missed, and grammar have made for a confusing read.
The good feedback:
Intriguing Cult characters, twisting story, fascinating references to past and present.
Strong lead character in Harper. Great development of her story, her history.
The Great Feedback:
This is quite simply a Ripping Good Yarn in need of professional polishing.
Not so good feedback:
It needs a polished edit.
Some small things like sentence structure, quotation marks that are missed, and grammar have made for a confusing read.
The good feedback:
Intriguing Cult characters, twisting story, fascinating references to past and present.
Strong lead character in Harper. Great development of her story, her history.
The Great Feedback:
This is quite simply a Ripping Good Yarn in need of professional polishing.
7/15/2009 5:30 PM PDT
This story has a LOT of chapters. =O
Anyway, it sounds very interesting, and the overview gives me a good vibe, as it has nice description by itself.
Anyway, it sounds very interesting, and the overview gives me a good vibe, as it has nice description by itself.
7/12/2009 12:46 PM PDT
Sounds good! I think I could really get into it.
7/10/2009 12:33 PM PDT
Love it-now please excuse me while i read on!......
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6/28/2009 10:12 PM PDT
Sounds absolutely brilliant!! Thanks for the invite! I'll be leaving feedback as I read!
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6/27/2009 10:23 AM PDT
This sounds amazing!
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6/26/2009 12:39 PM PDT
Delightful Jan,
I am up to Chapter 7 right along with you and wishing there was more.
I found little to comment on, but there were a few housekeeping issues that probably should be tidied up eventually. I'll make not of them the next time I read. Today I just couldn't slow down enough to do so. I was enthralled with the story.
I have to wonder -- is Naomi the 'same' Naomi we've met before?
I am up to Chapter 7 right along with you and wishing there was more.
I found little to comment on, but there were a few housekeeping issues that probably should be tidied up eventually. I'll make not of them the next time I read. Today I just couldn't slow down enough to do so. I was enthralled with the story.
I have to wonder -- is Naomi the 'same' Naomi we've met before?
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6/15/2009 12:59 PM PDT
Cool! I love stories like these. Please, please, please, continue writing this story or I will. And yes, that is a threat. No hard feelings, though, right? :D
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6/14/2009 1:08 PM PDT
Can't wait.
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