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Project Leader:
xnightsxxbloodx
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Glimpse Into Reality
The truth is clouded and often distorted. It is hard to filter out the lies from the truth. Reality is often hard to accept, but here it is. In the form of poetry, a view on life that often is missed.
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Love short meaningful poems, great job.
Here's the link to my poems, would appreciate if you took a look at them:
http://www.webook.com/project/Oppression-Hope-Freedom
Here's the link to my poems, would appreciate if you took a look at them:
http://www.webook.com/project/Oppression-Hope-Freedom
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great poetry! i hope your work gets published!!!
also, thanks for voting for my poetry!
also, thanks for voting for my poetry!
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The theme of these becomes a cry for the revelation of the truth hidden behind the wars and devastation they give birth to.
Certainly these should be published.
Check out "Private Jones' Reality" and "To the Shrink" at
http://www.webook.com/project/penbuddys-best-3-poems
These are my attempt to enlighten truth within war.
Good luck
Certainly these should be published.
Check out "Private Jones' Reality" and "To the Shrink" at
http://www.webook.com/project/penbuddys-best-3-poems
These are my attempt to enlighten truth within war.
Good luck
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Nightsblood,
I am glad I have the chance yet again to read your delightful (despite the irony of me calling them 'delightful' poetry. Your poems are like a gleam of sunshine (again, the irony) on a cloudy day.
I sincerely hope that these do not reflect your current state of being, you seem like such a smart, intelligent person... and these poems are wonderful. I wouldn't want you to be to stressed with life and it's many issues as such a young age..
I vote, of course publish.
I am glad I have the chance yet again to read your delightful (despite the irony of me calling them 'delightful' poetry. Your poems are like a gleam of sunshine (again, the irony) on a cloudy day.
I sincerely hope that these do not reflect your current state of being, you seem like such a smart, intelligent person... and these poems are wonderful. I wouldn't want you to be to stressed with life and it's many issues as such a young age..
I vote, of course publish.
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I love 'deception' very clever. A yes from me!
http://www.webook.com/project/In-Times-Of-Love-There-Were
http://www.webook.com/project/In-Times-Of-Love-There-Were
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Definitely dark and depressing but i really enjoyed them. Keep up the great work.
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Two thumbs-up from me!
Although dark and depressing the tones of some of your poems were, I enjoyed the emotion!
A yes vote from me, if it wasn't clear :)
~Kate
Although dark and depressing the tones of some of your poems were, I enjoyed the emotion!
A yes vote from me, if it wasn't clear :)
~Kate
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PUBLISH!!!
my favorite being, 'Deception' ...
if you want to find mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you!
my favorite being, 'Deception' ...
if you want to find mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you!
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