I definitely love this one again. I like when people use the ocean as a literary device. Though it can often be overused, you use it in a way that adds purity to your poetry. I love the flow of this poem, I think you handled it very well. You get my vote.

"Solitude" was the highlight of this collection. It had beautiful images and auditory cues. I do, however, wonder about the end of the poem. The last line seems off, and extremely dark compared to the rest of the poem. I would consider revising it, maybe with some hope. How can the void be filled? Or if you want to remain with a darker end, try something like, "Let the rain come" - something to fill the void, and drown the emotions.

Good luck!

http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul

Fantastic. Voted.

Feel free to check out mine...

http://www.webook.com/project/Animal-Cruelty

Nicely done! 

Great images which pull the reader willingly along. 

Write On!

Ocean Calling was beautiful and the imagery you used in it was astounding. The words paint a picture in the reader's mind and the flow keeps them wanting to read on. Well done.

Solitude was very similar to Ocean Calling in a way, but in another way completely contrasting. I love that image of the trees moaning as the wind blows their final leaves away, as it could symbolize  many different things. Nice job

Waterfall was very well done and emotional. There is also a truth in these words that one would have to have felt the same way to completely understand it.

Thanks for the read and you have my vote =)

Indeed publish, loved all three.

Good luck with the vote!

http://www.webook.com/project/My-3-Emotive-Entries

Voted.... best of luck.


If you've time...http://www.webook.com/project/My-Best-Three-Poems-WEBook-2009

;-) X

Publish!

You write much as I do; from the heart. And since all truth is not evident you have a nice style in the way you bring those truths out. I really liked the first one best The other two are quite good, but I especially preferred the first because you exposed your faith in that one. Great marriage of faith and poetry here. 

BTW:  I am quite sure you would enjoy skimming over my project "The Marvelous Adventures of the  SpiritTalker." I have a link to that and more on the bottom comment of my 2009 poetry contest submission. My poetry submission is here:

http://www.webook.com/poetry.aspx?p=ac366f04cc1f4161a8d81d0459a3ca18&sit=2a6dc2ccb1814a7abfbd4071bf30359e

Please come and have a look.

My fav. is Ocean Calling .
Good Luck.

Just voted.

http://www.webook.com/project/Top-3-Poems-of-Assorted-Interest

All three are refreshing in their love of nature my fave is Ocean Calling voted yes

I love this- Good luck

interesting work, good luck



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I liked the 1st poem best but overall good job, publish.

http://www.webook.com/project/Poem-of-the-stars

Publish.

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Trilogy

publish!!! wonderful.




if you want to find mine:

http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE

thank you.

Beautiful.
http://www.webook.com/project/In-Times-of-Love-There-Were

i vote publish.

Like I've already told you, I loved them! You have my vote. Good luck!

http://www.webook.com/project/Touch-My-Heart

A definate yes

A yes vote.

Excellent poems-like the 3rd poem