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Hidden Shadows

Poetry inspired and guided by my eyes and felt in my bones

My poetry is an account of me awaking to my self. An expression of words collaborating to make my feeling world in to a tactile medium, then to be turned into a non tactile feeling entity.

Winner! This book has been selected to become one of the next published WEbooks. It is no longer accepting new submissions from outside the project team. To contribute to final revisions before the book goes to print, leave your feedback here.

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HSBoehm

8/31/2009 8:44 PM PDT

OK now I am blushing. Thank you SPMount.

SPMount

8/31/2009 8:35 PM PDT

Well said RRickerd, If I could vote again for these I would. I thought they were brilliant too and very worthy of publication.

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HSBoehm

8/31/2009 12:09 PM PDT

My gosh how very nice of you to say that. Thank you.

RKRickerd

8/31/2009 11:30 AM PDT

Very nice prose, you have a natural talent for it.
I vote yes, because I want to be one of the few.
Who discovered the future, talent on the bookshop shelves.

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HSBoehm

8/30/2009 12:56 PM PDT

Grazie.

StephSebastian

8/30/2009 12:40 PM PDT

Excellente! Amavo tutte e tre le poesie

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Jenny_Moxham

8/29/2009 9:50 AM PDT

Good work here. It may not be perfect, but it is still worth a vote.

And if you have the time...

http://www.webook.com/project/Animal-Cruelty

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Amir_Dez

8/27/2009 12:57 PM PDT

**The power of a sword, in the form of a pen,**
Nice, your poems are great.
Thanks for your vote & wonderful feedback on my poems
Regards
Amir Dez

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santackas

8/26/2009 9:54 AM PDT

Great pieces.... a veritable pleasure to read!

please....http://www.webook.com/project/Three-of-my-best-Poems

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weepingwillow

8/25/2009 1:05 PM PDT

General:
Wow. Impressive.

Content:
Very strong point of views. And topics.

Imagery:
Startling at times (in a good way). I particularly love the reflection in blood and shattered glass in the bowels in "Shadows."

I think you balance imagery well with the abstract.

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ScottD15

8/24/2009 7:41 PM PDT

Shadows was well written and very emotional in parts. It captures that feeling of a relationship that someone decided to walk out on very well, although I'm not positive you were trying to portray that. Nicely done.

For Buttercup I liked the flow and some of the imagery. Although the other bits of imagery I found quite odd. It's very unique in it's own way.

Veil was absolutely beautiful. The first stanza was my favourite and drew me in while the rest kept me in, great job.

You've got my vote :P

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Sifer

8/21/2009 3:55 PM PDT

I like it, it really draws out a sence of everything in meaning. Coming from blank it means nothing but if you have a scene in you're mind about you that wraps it all up over all it's really good. Great choice for a cover it really sets things.

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HSBoehm

8/21/2009 2:09 PM PDT

Thank you for your review and you are welcome. What did you have in mind?

johntucker

8/21/2009 1:58 PM PDT

Your poetry is very different from mine to understand yours takes time and thought.

I enjoyed your obvious talent perhaps we should join forces - you can keep them thinking while I give them the 'quick fix' with very little effort required from them.

You write extremely well and this style suits you very well. I enjoy quality in any form and your poetry has plenty of that.

Good luck with the vote! And thank you for taking the trouble to review my project.

Kind Regards John

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shahw

8/21/2009 1:22 PM PDT

Oh liked these... shah. ;-) X

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Best-Three-Poems-WEBook-2009

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jezabel

8/20/2009 5:34 AM PDT

Veil is my favourite, a yes vote

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tattyhead

8/20/2009 3:26 AM PDT

Good Luck.

http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition

If you have time.

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ThereWilBeTime

8/19/2009 3:27 PM PDT

Wonderful poems! I loved the imagery, definitely got my vote! Good luck in the vote!

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arceyed

8/18/2009 2:23 AM PDT

publish!

please;
http://www.webook.com/project/Born-of-The-Sun

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Terrance

8/14/2009 9:13 PM PDT

I voted

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NJFemia

8/13/2009 10:55 AM PDT

My favorite is Veil. I am a fan of all three, we have similar poetry writing styles. I am a fan of poetry than has real grit. Well Done!!!

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sanctuaryrose

8/7/2009 3:13 PM PDT

Wow! PUBLISH!!

http://www.webook.com/project/Memory-Milk-in-3-Glasses

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AkeemH

8/6/2009 6:17 AM PDT

You have my vote.
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Top-Three

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BorgQueen

8/5/2009 6:44 PM PDT

Love the shadows so full of longing. It is so sad when the one we love dies and there are no goodbyes.

The anger ,at the state of man kind in Buttercup. Loved it.

Veil, If only, and jet life is so full of shit.

all the best.

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JamesConroy

8/5/2009 2:16 PM PDT

The repetition of the final line in each section reminds me of a responseoreal psalm. On the whole the work is very prayer like. Aspirations, fears and illusions-all trappings of religion. Idealism suffering creativity, a truly vicious circle.

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tuesday_rayne

8/5/2009 7:10 AM PDT

yes vote from me!!!!
great job, great writing.

http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE

thank you.

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BurningIvy

8/4/2009 6:57 PM PDT

As always you do not fail to disappoint! You my friend (and I do call you friend) are impressive. Yes!

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HSBoehm

8/4/2009 4:25 PM PDT

Thank you.

naiveandwitty

8/4/2009 3:48 PM PDT

each poem herein shows depth--a deep soul--a feeler, if you will.

i vote publish.

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jjbellinski

8/4/2009 3:40 PM PDT

I like the variety of your submission. You've got my vote.

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Trilogy

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MarkBrad

8/4/2009 12:10 PM PDT

three very good poems well done

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles

mikemurphy

8/2/2009 5:57 AM PDT

Three very good poems - a yes vote.
Best wishes,
Mike.

http://www.webook.com/project/Verse-Macabre

wayahowl

8/1/2009 4:51 PM PDT

am voting for your poems, love the veil, and i hope it makes it into the final selection.

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L_egoiste

8/1/2009 3:57 PM PDT

poem number one; love
poem number two; anger
poem number three; passion; idealism

You have a great talent for writing this kind of stuff man ... totally straight from the old ticker. Good luck; I left a publish it here for you! The'yd do well to choose at least one of these.

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HSBoehm

7/15/2009 9:02 PM PDT

Thank you, your feedback is very encouraging.

SPMount

7/15/2009 8:10 PM PDT

These are a beautiful trio ... well worthy of the competition. I wish you the best of luck with them, you write in this genre very well indeed.

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