Erratic Ghosts and Fear

Book Info

Project Leader:

DarkDre

Participants:
The WEbook community

Who Can Write:
All Participants

Format:
Continuous/Novel

Type:
Fiction

Genre:
Horror

Language:
English

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Erratic Ghosts and Fear

stories/poems that are grusome, and bone chillingly creepy

...Gothic stories and poems and stories I wrote about the supernatural. Some of the things I write about are fake and some are based on my experiences with the supernatural since I was a little child. ....these stories and poems were all epiphanies of mine....some are really gruesome and most are bone chillingly creepy.

Never thought....My biggest fear is one of my biggest obsession. .

copyright © 2008 by Andrea Narciso

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DarkDre

8/29/2008 10:40 PM PT

for anyone who drops by...feel free to add any story/poem who shares the same experience as me!!! I'll give you feed back!

DarkDre

8/29/2008 10:39 PM PT

feel free, mendy, to add poems!I like your poem!!!!

Mendy

8/29/2008 04:12 PM PT

I thought I was writing a new one by mistake in this project
Eh

Mendy

8/29/2008 04:10 PM PT

The blood poured down the face
The victim stared in stark eyed terror
How had this happened to him
He thought it would all improve for the better

But he had been wrong
You can never escape
The life of the street
Is always awaiting people with
It's unduly and truly deadly fate

That is the life he had tried to run from
The life he had loved once
But had changed and become one of the good ones
To be there for his family like he had promised years before

But the pain in his head was keeping him barely awake
He couldn't take the pain much longer
His sanity was now was now at stake

They wanted to break him
To tell them all he knew
But they were wrong
He didn't know anything at all

So when the needle went through hs finger
And he felt such horrible pain
That he wasd going to die
Like a miserable rat in cage

The salt was then poured on the wound
And he screamed and cried
The pain was so intense
He could do nothing more then just die

DeadmansHand

8/19/2008 05:53 AM PT

this is good stuff, keep it up

pastelspring

8/2/2008 05:34 PM PT

that is so good.

I am amazed at how young you are, yet you write with such knowledge.

luv
mel

everendeavor

7/30/2008 10:20 PM PT

Drew me in right away. I liked the sense of panic and then the sudden realization of what it was that was happening that instantly would bring fear to the reader. I would like to read more.