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"The Embryo Of My Manhood"

Rolled up my goals in a single sheet of paper to smoke it. And my coaches, always told me to dream high, but i couldn't afford that type of success, so I was forced to smoke the roaches.

These are a compilation of poems that i have been writing since high school. A lot of poems are new, others have been edited over time.

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Footprints

8/1/2008 6:01 AM PDT

Nice work! I love the usage of descripted words and undoubtably intellegent forthought.
footprints

Mark

7/27/2008 11:58 PM PDT

Rap on brother....rap on!
Fine write!

JAYG_EIMAJ

7/27/2008 8:24 PM PDT

wow that was ill-man keep doin what u do

ChristoDiata

7/27/2008 12:30 PM PDT

good stuff .. like the flow... could be rap (hip hop) with the right beat..good rhythm good flow... keep it up

Jordan_Beason

7/26/2008 8:46 PM PDT

I dont write much about love but I really like the way you expressed this poem. It all flowed together line by line. I admire your poetic style. I like how you can explain something while still rhyming {whcih I can also do myself} because not all writers can. Great Poem

jessefranklin

7/26/2008 2:52 PM PDT

hahah you should ghostwrite for some of these stupid rappers, that was dope steeze

Dominoe

7/25/2008 2:34 PM PDT

"Can i kiss your stanza and lick you personification" Clever, very clever. I liked this, I see where you're coming from with the imagery. Good job.

natamil

7/23/2008 8:54 PM PDT

that was hot, you got all the girls sweating in their seats lol... imagry is mad crazy ... can't say the rest right now ;) lol jks holla back

Akemi18

7/23/2008 8:46 PM PDT

This one is hardbody my dude, i feel you on this i can relate to this so much it crazy.

Soprannomi

7/22/2008 7:46 PM PDT

wow....you are amazing. Your vocab is astronomical. I'm absolutely impressed with your poetry. Can you flow as good as you write? You've just gained a new fan. Keep doin your thang young brotha

teekieb

7/22/2008 12:17 PM PDT

maybe one day we can do a piece together. to be so young you have skill that I admire

GLFernandez

7/21/2008 7:16 AM PDT

Lyrical Nympho is lyrical climax... a tribute to a poet with feelings so strong. You explain me and do not know me. I feel your pain... sorrow... and joy and love. keep um' flowing Brother you are one of the best.

GLFernandez

7/21/2008 7:08 AM PDT

Again i say this is fantastic. Keep on spitting that flo!!!

GLFernandez

7/21/2008 7:04 AM PDT

Sub Conscious Writer is amazing. I have never seen life explained so completely. I loved it. Like Tasia stated; you are one blessed brother.

TASIA

7/21/2008 6:06 AM PDT

SNAP SNAP SNAP SNAP!!!!! LOL this was Wonderful. my brotha you are BLESSED!

keenammartin

7/20/2008 3:25 PM PDT

LOVE IT!!

Chozen2

7/20/2008 2:39 PM PDT

What!That was tight.

hatablocker223

7/20/2008 2:01 PM PDT

WOW!!!! i'm very new to this site and i just wanted to say that you have become my favorite poet of all time. i loved this from start to finish. you have a way with words here and i adore it. great job.

Danica

Lifeofme

7/19/2008 6:40 PM PDT

YOU ARE AMAZING!!! MAN, YO, U ARE GOOOOOD...I WAS ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT READING THIS..MAN U GOOD..KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!

Lifeofme

7/19/2008 6:31 PM PDT

damn son, das wassup, u real good..i like that line"write poems so sweet they produce glucose" that was nice ..lol..keep up the good work!!

rookie23

7/18/2008 2:17 PM PDT

I like it. I Felt it. I like how you involve sex, life and poetry. Passion baby, all the way through your limbs, my style. Thanks for letting me view... Rookie23