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Project Leader:
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Poetry -
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Language:
English
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How I feel
You are always in my heart, that is why we cannot part.
I love you and you love me, it's so Great the world can see.
So remember that we have a shot, to show our love won't be forgot.
I love you and you love me, it's so Great the world can see.
So remember that we have a shot, to show our love won't be forgot.
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7/20/2008 11:17 AM PDT
You also cannot submit single poems for publication, thus my rating.
7/20/2008 11:17 AM PDT
Too cliché, and I worry you sacrificed more creative vocabulary for the sake of writing.
Try a version that is longer and does not rhyme, and see if you can express yourself better.
Try a version that is longer and does not rhyme, and see if you can express yourself better.
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