If I Was

I wrote this children's book over 10 years ago.

I wrote this children's book over 10 years ago, and have been looking to get it published for some time. It's the daily adventures of a little boy, and what he thinks about everyday.

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TsungChi

7/31/2008 7:44 PM PDT

Cute, but I think the examples of what he can't do lack the depth/creativity to bring the message home. For some reason I'm thinking of the book, "Zen Shorts."---I guess because the DETAIL of the scenarios is so great, I'm swept up into the message...

wordman

7/26/2008 8:19 AM PDT

very inspiring.good work.

Landfyoung

7/22/2008 11:57 PM PDT

I love that it is simple and sweet. A good children's story.

countrygal

7/21/2008 4:37 PM PDT

Great piece! I can just imagine that being on a bookshelf-cute illustrations and all! I just may vote on this but I want to read some of the other submitted pieces before I make any final decisions.

Charistakinstep

7/20/2008 7:30 PM PDT

Furbie I submitted a vote for this wonderful book love it

Tamara0449

7/20/2008 3:35 PM PDT

Hi furbe4God, I loved your children's story. I did Vote for it, please check out my story and Vote for it if you find it worthy of your vote. Check it out on 'Body, Mind and Health' on Projects.
Good luck with your childrens story.
Sincerely,
Tamara0449
www.spiritual-harmony.com