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Infected
The world's not the same. With the discovery of a new 'disease', several scientists have decided to use it to their advantage. And in doing so, risk the lives of countless people. One boy started it all, and when he thought he had finished it, he realized it was only just the beginning. One girl proves that scientists are still infecting others, and that she could be one of the only people to help him stop it.
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This sounds really good! I am definantly going to go ahead and read it....
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Plot:
Your plot is compelling. Your cliffhangers make me want to cry though! I'm just waiting to see what happens next! I think it's awesome that you have thought of such a creative idea. I want to know what the infection is! Zombies?
Character Development:
Your character development is beautiful though, I do have to say. I feel for her, and I want everything to be all right for her. I'm excited to find out what happens next.
Structure:
The only thing that confused me about your story was in the prologue, it seemed to start out of nowhere. For example, your character starts of walking on a chilly day, where was she walking? I had trouble picturing the setting.
Tone/Voice:
The voice of the story is absolutely amazing. It feels like she's actually telling me the story. You used a lot of beautiful adjectives.
Your plot is compelling. Your cliffhangers make me want to cry though! I'm just waiting to see what happens next! I think it's awesome that you have thought of such a creative idea. I want to know what the infection is! Zombies?
Character Development:
Your character development is beautiful though, I do have to say. I feel for her, and I want everything to be all right for her. I'm excited to find out what happens next.
Structure:
The only thing that confused me about your story was in the prologue, it seemed to start out of nowhere. For example, your character starts of walking on a chilly day, where was she walking? I had trouble picturing the setting.
Tone/Voice:
The voice of the story is absolutely amazing. It feels like she's actually telling me the story. You used a lot of beautiful adjectives.
This Feedback was...
I definitely would like to read this. It sounds very interesting, but infortunately I don't have the time. I will definitely come back to read!
-Sarah
-Sarah
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