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-Aulie

I got bored during the prolaug make it more interesting.

This sounds really good! I am definantly going to go ahead and read it....

Sounds good!

i like this keep it up :D

Sounds really good!!!!

Plot:
Your plot is compelling. Your cliffhangers make me want to cry though! I'm just waiting to see what happens next! I think it's awesome that you have thought of such a creative idea. I want to know what the infection is! Zombies?

Character Development:
Your character development is beautiful though, I do have to say. I feel for her, and I want everything to be all right for her. I'm excited to find out what happens next.

Structure:
The only thing that confused me about your story was in the prologue, it seemed to start out of nowhere. For example, your character starts of walking on a chilly day, where was she walking? I had trouble picturing the setting.

Tone/Voice:
The voice of the story is absolutely amazing. It feels like she's actually telling me the story. You used a lot of beautiful adjectives.

I definitely would like to read this. It sounds very interesting, but infortunately I don't have the time. I will definitely come back to read!

-Sarah

Wow, sounds really super!! :D