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naiveandwitty

8/31/2009 3:59 PM PDT

you have my vote.

Jenny_Moxham

8/29/2009 9:59 AM PDT

Good work here. It may not be perfect, but it is still worth a vote.

And if you have the time...

http://www.webook.com/project/Animal-Cruelty

OldTimer

8/20/2009 4:29 PM PDT

Its a no from me. Frankly I found these a little priggish and restatements of time-worn themes. "Time Forgets" is lacking poetic content; it is mostly non-poetic statements like "Although time forgets the past very easily--it is not as easy for us." (why use em dashes?) The rhyme in the last stanza is childish. "Looking Back" and "Transcendent Dream" are mostly gratuitous images which don't support the conclusion.

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Terrance

8/14/2009 9:21 PM PDT

I voted.

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Izzy1804

8/12/2009 1:08 PM PDT

Got my vote :P

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tattyhead

8/11/2009 2:47 PM PDT

Good Luck.

http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition

If you have the time.

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MarkBrad

8/4/2009 10:53 AM PDT

very enjoyable read, good luck

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles

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sixteenpages

8/2/2009 7:28 AM PDT

I enjoyed all three poems. You have a way taking the reader on your journeys of peace and freedom. Thanks for the trip and all the lovely scenery along the way.

Thumbs up!

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