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It Gets DEEPER
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12/13/2009 7:33 PM PST
Very enjoyable but I am afraid i tend to write (or try to lol) more in the manner of the 19th century poets. I enjoyed this collection though!
4/20/2009 10:16 AM PDT
nice collection indeed. publish. please check out my combined children's poem book in the children's section of the vote.
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4/17/2009 10:06 AM PDT
a nice collection
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4/12/2009 10:45 PM PDT
Nice, very nice...
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4/12/2009 11:42 AM PDT
I like some of the stuff here
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4/12/2009 10:03 AM PDT
i read, i examine, i study and yet i still find myself perplexed.
how does one write poetry?
how does one write poetry?
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4/11/2009 10:19 PM PDT
missed your work hvt been on webook in a while now just read this and its gr8 wonder if its a real tru story thou..
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4/11/2009 3:03 PM PDT
Deep and thought provoking.
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4/11/2009 7:05 AM PDT
Loved the poem, The True Self! Good Luck. nancy
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4/11/2009 4:59 AM PDT
Here's my vote
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4/11/2009 1:25 AM PDT
Capturing emotions of despair is a literary skill, well done.
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4/10/2009 8:28 PM PDT
This is all heart... I love it... Your friend in poetry... Jackreed3...
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4/10/2009 4:59 AM PDT
Beautiful talent coming together, What a masterpiece..
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4/9/2009 3:51 PM PDT
nice work picture connection good luck mike
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4/9/2009 3:51 PM PDT
you have a growing skill on writing keep working a my friend mike
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4/9/2009 7:07 AM PDT
I always find it difficult in multiple projects, but you have some real talent here, so it’s a yes from me.
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4/9/2009 1:54 AM PDT
Some great work here thumbs up
Anyone who wants to vote on my project it's called 'watch out'
Anyone who wants to vote on my project it's called 'watch out'
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4/9/2009 12:58 AM PDT
Thumbs up, goodluck everyone, love Wennie xxxhugs
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4/8/2009 11:21 AM PDT
i wish you all success.
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4/8/2009 8:38 AM PDT
Great Job! u got my vote
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4/7/2009 4:18 PM PDT
Got my vote - keep up the good work!
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4/7/2009 12:39 PM PDT
If you can get her you can keep here---keep her
Interesting lines, and love has to be both ways, one way love never works at all.
Interesting lines, and love has to be both ways, one way love never works at all.
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4/7/2009 11:50 AM PDT
Publish!
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4/7/2009 11:09 AM PDT
Sorry -- that was supposed to be feedback on a poem -- I'm still figuring out how this place works. . .
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4/7/2009 11:07 AM PDT
Wow -- been there, done that! Well said!
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4/7/2009 10:56 AM PDT
You certainly have my vote!
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4/7/2009 7:31 AM PDT
My son said "ay vern yo flow is gettn better"
My progress expressn my hunger for the cheddar'
I guess you can say when i make it that I deserved it
All this time I put in im feeln like is it worth it, Yessssssss!
Im tired of struggln is hard enough being black
I cant get a job and my pops still hitting crack
I heard aaliyah voice last night behind da music
like "If first u dnt succeed dnt stop u can do it"
So im moving like U-Haul trying to make it happen
I write like Islam pray trying to make it rapping
Five times a day, Five times to say
Some shit I thought about bout five times today
hhmmm....Feeling like im just five rhymes away
Living righteously never five times asttray
Im done with the five rhymes i spit it five times
Just to let u cowards kno that im spittnn w 5 minds
Gotta get up out da hole in need of a "Blind Five"
Blinded by the windows of da hood its like lookn thru five blinds............
My progress expressn my hunger for the cheddar'
I guess you can say when i make it that I deserved it
All this time I put in im feeln like is it worth it, Yessssssss!
Im tired of struggln is hard enough being black
I cant get a job and my pops still hitting crack
I heard aaliyah voice last night behind da music
like "If first u dnt succeed dnt stop u can do it"
So im moving like U-Haul trying to make it happen
I write like Islam pray trying to make it rapping
Five times a day, Five times to say
Some shit I thought about bout five times today
hhmmm....Feeling like im just five rhymes away
Living righteously never five times asttray
Im done with the five rhymes i spit it five times
Just to let u cowards kno that im spittnn w 5 minds
Gotta get up out da hole in need of a "Blind Five"
Blinded by the windows of da hood its like lookn thru five blinds............
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4/7/2009 7:02 AM PDT
Got My Vote
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4/7/2009 2:59 AM PDT
Another vote from me
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4/7/2009 12:59 AM PDT
This is one poetry collection that definitely got my vote. Very enjoyable.
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4/6/2009 8:55 PM PDT
yeah!
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4/6/2009 8:15 PM PDT
come on!
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4/6/2009 5:29 PM PDT
casted my vote =]
congrats guys on a fine assortment of poems
hopefully other webookers will find it fit
for this project to be published
congrats guys on a fine assortment of poems
hopefully other webookers will find it fit
for this project to be published
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4/6/2009 5:25 PM PDT
This is amazing
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4/6/2009 4:24 PM PDT
It has been a pleasure to be a part of this project :)
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4/6/2009 3:53 PM PDT
A great read deserves to be published...this project had amazing contributions.
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4/6/2009 3:09 PM PDT
~ealove2 - you have assembled a fine collection of talented webooking writers here. Pub this one WEbook!
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4/6/2009 2:26 PM PDT
Thumbs up! Thanks for all your motivating feedback comments, I appreciate it. Best of luck everyone.
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4/6/2009 11:37 AM PDT
excellent!
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4/6/2009 11:24 AM PDT
My vote is here for you and i will see if i could get tothers to oblige.
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4/6/2009 10:39 AM PDT
You have my vote!
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4/6/2009 10:04 AM PDT
You are a very good writer I love your style. I voted for you please vote for my book "King Loverr: Diary of a Philosophical Loner.
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3/28/2009 12:10 PM PDT
Thank you for the advice, guidance and support you have given me with your reviews :) Really helpful and motivating. Cant say enough thank you's. Good luck for the cycle, you have my vote :)
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3/28/2009 4:58 AM PDT
Thanks for your kind words on my submissions, im not in the class of many here but i enjoy sharing my thoughts, take care sean :)
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3/23/2009 12:38 AM PDT
thanks for the invite.
give me some feed back, i'll return the favor.
let me know, did you love it, hate it?
my feelings wont be hurt.
-David
give me some feed back, i'll return the favor.
let me know, did you love it, hate it?
my feelings wont be hurt.
-David
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3/20/2009 8:39 PM PDT
Thanks for the invite!!
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3/19/2009 11:21 AM PDT
Thank you all!! Looking forward to working with every one.
And Shastinmichelle...thanks, that is so great to hear =)
And Shastinmichelle...thanks, that is so great to hear =)
3/18/2009 12:41 PM PDT
thanks for the invite!!! I will definitley be contributing =)
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3/18/2009 10:48 AM PDT
this is defiantly the spot to be... great work in this project for sure! keep it up my fellow poets!
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3/17/2009 5:30 AM PDT
thanks for invite - you get my next poem - although "Deep stuff" is not usually my forte - maybe I'll challange myself
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3/15/2009 8:30 PM PDT
Thanks for the invite. I have never really tried writing poetry, but I will try
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3/15/2009 1:57 PM PDT
Thanks for the invite - I'm pretty busy but will have a read and pen something appropriate!
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3/13/2009 6:38 PM PDT
Thanks for the invite. I am not much of a poet but with some great support and comments I will get better and better hopefully. I invite comments and such to all I put up. Thanks.
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3/13/2009 1:12 AM PDT
I'm glad you are all a part of this project. i hope you participate in every possible way =) writing and reviewing. Such talent here that aught to be recognized. I will read each piece in due time, i hope you would take time to both read and write! Thank you all for joining it is a privilege and an honor. =) Cheers
3/12/2009 9:02 AM PDT
Thanks for the invite.
Will beaver away soon...
:o)
Will beaver away soon...
:o)
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3/11/2009 4:41 PM PDT
Thanks for the invite. I'll try to post something cool in the next couple of days :D
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2/25/2009 6:33 PM PST
thank you for the invite!
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2/20/2009 8:24 PM PST
much thanks for the invite
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2/11/2009 11:59 PM PST
I really enjoy this project, there are so many good poets and works here.
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2/10/2009 11:09 AM PST
Thanks for the invite.
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1/22/2009 8:05 AM PST
HAHAHA this is great we are gonna have so much fun with this project! Thanks for posts already that was quick and this is great!! have fun everyone and im here so dont hesitate to message me :)
Andrea
Andrea
1/21/2009 10:23 PM PST
alright im ready to kick this off kaizar you rock bro ready to see some good stuff from you.
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1/21/2009 6:31 PM PST
We will certainly do wiii xD thanks a lot!!! Enjoy life and space traveling on a spoon!!!C=
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