Jamie Flint

A short teen novel with vampiric and homosexual tendencies

Kevin is your average gay teen, ostracized by his peers and overlooked by his family. That is, until he meets Jamie Flint, the deeply mysterious, incredibly attractive new kid. Plunged into a strange world he knows nothing of, Kevin discovers friendship with Jamie, and possibly something more...

Jamie Flint has been published! I plan on leaving it up here for a few more weeks, so I'd greatly appreciate it if you'd like to read and comment now. Check out the book in print at

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Penelope

10/10/2008 11:18 PM PDT

I'm taking this off the site on Friday. Thanks everyone for your input!

H_M_H

7/24/2008 1:43 PM PDT

I think this story has serious potential. Your style is great. Great voice and tone. It needs to be teased out more, though. I felt like the ending was a little indulgent. There were no obstacles, everyone just got what they wanted without having to put up a fight. And I want to know more about all the characters. I felt a little like I'd been robbed of the setup and just got the punchline. I think if you would go back and add more depth and detail, give more background, basically just deepen the plot and make it longer, this could be an AWESOME book.

I'd read it, and I'm not even into gay/sci-fi themes. Seriously, you have some awesome characters here, and a really unique voice. You should take this to some kind of workshop and turn it into a novel.

AshleyNichole

7/21/2008 7:37 PM PDT

I loved it..... you need to keep writing.

Athena_rose

7/18/2008 4:13 PM PDT

The chapters are kind of short, but very good.

saraelizabeth

7/18/2008 10:52 AM PDT

You know, most vampire lore says vampires turn to dust in the sunlight... obviously this is your story, you make the rules. So really, just for your information.

AngieCoop09

7/17/2008 1:18 AM PDT

I don't know. What ever you think? I never thought about that, but this story is fantastic. Sequels are tricky. They have to live up to the first, but you, I think you could do it if you set your mind to it. I think if you publish this, everyone would read it. Especially in La Porte, Indiana. I know many friends who would read this.

Penelope

7/14/2008 9:42 AM PDT

Thanks! Nope, that's the end. I was considering writing a sequel but I feel like that might ruin it. I'm not sure yet.

AngieCoop09

7/13/2008 8:48 PM PDT

The story is great. I just corrected a few gramatical errors, but that is all. I love it. Are you expanding it, or is that the end?