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Jerome
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Jerome's Best 3 Poems

These are my best 3 poems, that I chosen

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Jenny_Moxham

8/29/2009 9:28 AM PDT

A yes vote from me.

http://www.webook.com/project/Animal-Cruelty

YunaRaven

8/28/2009 12:28 AM PDT

Bonne chance:)
La deuxieme est ma préferé.

moxhp

8/22/2009 7:04 AM PDT

Excellent Work Here. Voted...

http://www.webook.com/project/Top-3-Poems-of-Assorted-Interest

jjbellinski

8/7/2009 10:40 AM PDT

I had to overlook a lot of errors but I voted for you anyway.

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Trilogy

LB1968

8/6/2009 9:21 PM PDT

When you post something for the general population to review it should be meticulous as far as spelling, apostrophes, etc. I did not see that in your work and was disappointed. That is not to say that your use of imagery is very good, particularly in "Sa Picture".

tuesday_rayne

8/6/2009 3:06 AM PDT

I say YES for content!!!
good job and great luck to you.

if you want to find mine:

http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE

thank you!

metric1

8/4/2009 3:31 PM PDT

these could be good with a bit of work so I will vote maybe.

naiveandwitty

8/4/2009 12:58 PM PDT

you have my vote.

MarkBrad

8/4/2009 12:47 PM PDT

i enjoyed the read

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles

RKRickerd

8/4/2009 10:03 AM PDT

This piece has posibilities but they aor overshadowed by the flagrant disreguard for the spelling and use of capital letters.

Do i should be Do I then Do isee him with her?
followed by Do I see the dark will [the] loner be loved.

Street talk jargon simply does not make good prose in my opinion many will disagree but I have to go with maybe.