Book Info
Participants:
The WEbook community
The WEbook community
Who Can Write:
Project Leader Only
Project Leader Only
Format:
Continuous/Novel
Continuous/Novel
Type:
Fiction
Fiction
Genre:
Science Fiction and Fantasy
Science Fiction and Fantasy
Language:
English
English
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11/27/2008 12:34 PM PT
Wow dude you wrote this! I knew you had great Ideas but his is genius I love it!
11/27/2008 11:28 AM PT
well i don't agree with Danny Hill either i might not be i writer myself but destane is my sister so i know way more about stories than he dose if u keep trying you will get is yes all beginners make have problems even professionals have problem writing some times i read all most every book on webook so u do better than most people
10/30/2008 08:42 PM PT
One part of it (the dragon part) sounds a bit like the Eragon series. it sounds cool, but not my thing. i guess its also sort of like Aveyond
10/30/2008 02:18 PM PT
I do not agree with DannyHill at all I enjoyed your writing all the chapters you have for this book. Yes there are problems but they are one you can over come. You have a strong talent as young writer and I am not saying that just to be nice. With a little work and effort this could be a very strong book whether you decide to take to editor or do the editing yourself. Do not get discourage on what others might say. I am sure might find flaws in there work to because nobody is perfect I know I am not.
10/11/2008 06:42 PM PT
If you can't spell you can't write and if you can't punctuate you've got no right to expect readers like myself to work their way through your turgid paragraphs...you might be good but for Heavens's sake, as I'm sure you know, writing isn't like crossing the road, not everyone can do it! Give yourself a chance, learn the basics and please at all times respect your reader...'cos as a writer that's all you've got!
8/30/2008 08:18 PM PT
Hey everyone, I hope you like my story, it's about magik and dragons and vampires and a strange race of humans called the Hiogna. There is lots of magik to be experienced in this story and if you have any suggestions to something I could add or maybe a monster you invented that you think would be cool in a book I'd love to hear about it. You can either massage me or leave a comment. The creature could be sweet and cute or huge and evil, there's no limit and if you leave a comment I'll be sure to mention your monster in my book.
:) Aniytlia
:) Aniytlia
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