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Lost Beneath The Surface (For submissions, see Part 2)
Here is where you post anything, and I mean anything.
Though it's debatable whether what we write is suitable, or deemed good. You can't stop people from feeling the way they feel, and the same way you can't stop people from feeling the way they feel, you can't stop them from writing about it either. This site is all about writing which is a way of expressing yourself and this project is all about writing about whatever you want with out being judged for it.
Mistakes don't matter - sure it's n ... more »
Though it's debatable whether what we write is suitable, or deemed good. You can't stop people from feeling the way they feel, and the same way you can't stop people from feeling the way they feel, you can't stop them from writing about it either. This site is all about writing which is a way of expressing yourself and this project is all about writing about whatever you want with out being judged for it.
Mistakes don't matter - sure it's n ... more »
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3/13/2011 7:28 AM PDT
Project closed with 429 submissions, you guys are epic! ^-^
11/30/2010 6:46 PM PST
definetly it should be published!!! why? because you have potential as a writer!!! you mght not become as rich as jk rowling, but you'll be successful. that's all i can say. keep writing!- i support you!!!
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10/19/2010 8:50 AM PDT
One More Try
Yes, I tried again - marriage that is - again, it just didn't work. Maybe it's just in this gene pool of mine. With a mother who was married three times and a sperm donor who was married seven times what made me think any marriage I tried would work? It doesn't mean I'm a failure.
So, after twenty years of sadness I took my granddaughter, a few things I really liked, and we moved to a neat house on the lake. It all came together as though God's hand directed it personally. Odd too, one of the owners actually went to school with my husband - we met on Facebook.
One night she was sharing about this wonderful house she and her husband owned on the lake and was concerned about what they were going to do with it. Then I shared that I was actually looking for somewhere to move and she offered to me. So, here we are.
In about a week I will turn sixty, I'm on disability, but I'm funny, enjoy people and I'm happy to get out from under the gloomy cloud I've lived under for twenty years.
Lost - Beneath the Surface? Not anymore. I see sunshine and breathe fresh air - amazing!
Yes, I tried again - marriage that is - again, it just didn't work. Maybe it's just in this gene pool of mine. With a mother who was married three times and a sperm donor who was married seven times what made me think any marriage I tried would work? It doesn't mean I'm a failure.
So, after twenty years of sadness I took my granddaughter, a few things I really liked, and we moved to a neat house on the lake. It all came together as though God's hand directed it personally. Odd too, one of the owners actually went to school with my husband - we met on Facebook.
One night she was sharing about this wonderful house she and her husband owned on the lake and was concerned about what they were going to do with it. Then I shared that I was actually looking for somewhere to move and she offered to me. So, here we are.
In about a week I will turn sixty, I'm on disability, but I'm funny, enjoy people and I'm happy to get out from under the gloomy cloud I've lived under for twenty years.
Lost - Beneath the Surface? Not anymore. I see sunshine and breathe fresh air - amazing!
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10/18/2010 9:11 AM PDT
wfr_uk
If you don't understand, you don't have to participate, simple.
Those who understand will take part, those who don't will look on and find a more suitable project.
I'm not trying to be rude but these projects get a lot of slack that they don't deserve.
If you don't understand, you don't have to participate, simple.
Those who understand will take part, those who don't will look on and find a more suitable project.
I'm not trying to be rude but these projects get a lot of slack that they don't deserve.
10/17/2010 6:13 PM PDT
Not sure what the point is to this, mate.
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10/6/2010 3:39 AM PDT
Haha thanks :D
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10/5/2010 12:07 PM PDT
I love the idea, seriously!
But that would be pretty difficult to get done, I'd have to round everyone up and get permission and stuff (to be honest I don't even know what we'd have to do)
But I love the title, "Voices of the lost souls."
^_^
But that would be pretty difficult to get done, I'd have to round everyone up and get permission and stuff (to be honest I don't even know what we'd have to do)
But I love the title, "Voices of the lost souls."
^_^
10/5/2010 3:13 AM PDT
Haha yeah! :P Lol I was just thinking about how much it inspired me. There be thousand others like us out there who may not have had the access to the internet or sit and read this. Just so that they are inspired and encouraged too. Haha just a crazy idea though. It doesn't matter :P
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10/4/2010 10:51 AM PDT
You think this project should be published?! ^^
10/4/2010 3:22 AM PDT
This has to printed and named "Voices of the lost souls" LOL just a crazy idea. It's a wonderful book. Completely love it. I actually feel relieved to know that I'm not alone! :)
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10/2/2010 6:36 AM PDT
Heavens Journey-A Secret Diary is a memoir narrative. Carol's Journey is a story about her chaotic life style which includes a list of numerous foster homes, children homes, a convent, and multiple step-families.
She must learn how to cope from a perpetual whirlwind of instability that foreshadows her past, present, and future. Most of all Carol learns that 'Love" can build a bridge to the most basic fundamental need of human existence.
She must learn how to cope from a perpetual whirlwind of instability that foreshadows her past, present, and future. Most of all Carol learns that 'Love" can build a bridge to the most basic fundamental need of human existence.
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10/1/2010 12:09 PM PDT
Aw man 300 already?
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9/25/2010 3:58 PM PDT
Declining the invite to keep some space open on the computer, but I'll probably be following this. ;)
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9/25/2010 10:23 AM PDT
And we have hit the 300 mark.
Bloody hell guys, your support is brilliant.
I am glad I made this project, thanks for all your submissions and reviews.
Bloody hell guys, your support is brilliant.
I am glad I made this project, thanks for all your submissions and reviews.
9/23/2010 11:45 AM PDT
Your thanks is much appreciated pinkledbeatle, I'm glad you feel that way. =D
9/12/2010 3:20 PM PDT
Wow this was very interesting to read. I'm really impressed at how each of your submissions blend into one another. Its really beautiful. The topic is of course very insightful and one that most people can connect to so I must congratulate the creator for the brilliant idea.
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9/12/2010 5:47 AM PDT
lost in my thoguhts again twirling around just aching to scream out to someone anyone. how do u die when you are dead inside already. lonliness is the death of me my thoughts why? are they the way they are? am i different or just crazy? who would think I would feel like this at 24. When i was 17 i had the world at my door now the world is far into space.
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8/11/2010 6:02 PM PDT
why do we say i love you? it doesnt really mean anything half the time. you tend to leave the one you say i love you to. you grow apart no matter what that spark you once had is now nothing more than a twinkle of light. and it hurts it hurts alot to see them walk away and know nothing you say can help this situation. its over and theres nothing that can help you. you remember that person and you think back. you wonder why you were with this person this person who did you wrong so many times. yet you miss this person regardless of how they treated you. even though they hurt you in many ways and say they only are with you so they can use you you still seem to remember the good times and even the bad times look nice. you walk on and feel lost without thst person. why why do we say i love you when you are just going to leave?
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8/3/2010 11:49 AM PDT
We're up to 176 submissions, I really never expected it to get this far especially after such a short space of time.
Thanks guys and I'm glad you feel you can share here.
Thanks guys and I'm glad you feel you can share here.
8/3/2010 4:52 AM PDT
Of course =]
8/2/2010 6:50 PM PDT
can you invite me to join this project please??
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8/1/2010 1:54 PM PDT
We all want somewhere to belong, and someone to care and protect us. We want to feel wanted, a sense of home and to have a life with friends and people who love you as much as you love them, but sometimes, we have to face the fact that that's not always what happens, it doesn't always go the way we want it...they way we need it...to go. Sometimes we feel alone, hated, betrayed, confused, hurt, and numb from the world. But we don't go out without a fight, whether we know it or not. We try to ignore the nightmares, the staring faces with eyes full of hate, the betrayals. We try to be normal.
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7/30/2010 9:07 AM PDT
life hurts so much. friends grow apart but why? we say things we dont always mean. is it right to feel these feelings of regret? why do i always let the best things in life slip away from me? i hear your voice but your so far away. you give me butterflies you always have. lately i just shy away from everyone. taking meds to help the pain but also to forget the past.
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7/25/2010 10:03 PM PDT
what is this chance of birth?
why is he able to change a fate, with just a word?
And I can not even change my own.
I want access to his secret code, I want a diety to smile on me, give me power over another's fate, change the course of another's days.
I would be more gracious than he
with another's life and love and fate.
He squanders such a gift, and gives it breath, and turns away.
I would not be as careless as he, to leave anothers life in ruin
or wait.....
would power corupt me too?
I take it back, oh diety stay away
someday he'll compensate but it's a debt I'll never pay, for I am kind and sore and weak and on my way without regret.
why is he able to change a fate, with just a word?
And I can not even change my own.
I want access to his secret code, I want a diety to smile on me, give me power over another's fate, change the course of another's days.
I would be more gracious than he
with another's life and love and fate.
He squanders such a gift, and gives it breath, and turns away.
I would not be as careless as he, to leave anothers life in ruin
or wait.....
would power corupt me too?
I take it back, oh diety stay away
someday he'll compensate but it's a debt I'll never pay, for I am kind and sore and weak and on my way without regret.
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7/10/2010 3:05 PM PDT
I'm lost beneath the surface
and I can't breathe
I'm screaming yelling crying
but
no one can hear me
I've tried to find my way back up
but I'm let down once again
I'm lonely and afraid
and thats just when
I realize Lost is where I am
and where I want to be
its where I get my knowledge
and my creativity
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Just went in. lol :)
and I can't breathe
I'm screaming yelling crying
but
no one can hear me
I've tried to find my way back up
but I'm let down once again
I'm lonely and afraid
and thats just when
I realize Lost is where I am
and where I want to be
its where I get my knowledge
and my creativity
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Just went in. lol :)
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7/10/2010 12:12 AM PDT
well, it's just weird to feel so empty even if u know there are people who love u and care for u despite ur shortcomings. thanks for this project. it's pretty cool. :D
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7/6/2010 11:45 AM PDT
i am alone in this world. i have only regret, anger, and sadness in my life. never any happiness. every moment there is someone ready to kill me there is someone ready to hurt me. no one is there for me. not even i am there for me. i have died inside my other emotions are chained and locked away in the back of my mind...i am lonley always alone not even my parents care i am isolated from others i was born alone and i shall die alone...i have tried suicide many times but somehow i always awake my body not wanting to part with my soul yet. no one loves me no one ever will i was born a mistake not even meant to be alive some may call it a miracle but me i call it living hell.
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7/1/2010 9:24 PM PDT
I am alone.
Whatever nuisance intrudes upon my sanctuary is my enemy. Anyone who dare have the nerve to step into my thoughts had better come adequately prepared, for my years locked in my mind have given me time to hone my bitter aggression. I find solace in that which others scorn, and my resentment has become a dagger fatal to any mortal. An arsenal of cynicism is at my side at all times, and the many conclusions about mortality I have reached throughout my life have proved superior ammunition. Let this be a warning to those who wish to venture into the minefield that is my thought, then. Do not come near me for the sake of your own sanity. I, the bearer of these burdens, stand single among them. I am one within my own mind. I am, truly, wholeheartedly, alone.
Whatever nuisance intrudes upon my sanctuary is my enemy. Anyone who dare have the nerve to step into my thoughts had better come adequately prepared, for my years locked in my mind have given me time to hone my bitter aggression. I find solace in that which others scorn, and my resentment has become a dagger fatal to any mortal. An arsenal of cynicism is at my side at all times, and the many conclusions about mortality I have reached throughout my life have proved superior ammunition. Let this be a warning to those who wish to venture into the minefield that is my thought, then. Do not come near me for the sake of your own sanity. I, the bearer of these burdens, stand single among them. I am one within my own mind. I am, truly, wholeheartedly, alone.
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6/24/2010 9:50 PM PDT
Lost with out a Dream or Desire
Ignited with the Passion to end this life
Standing upon the Mountain watching the stars light the sky
Still without Hope or not hearing the song of the wind
Lost in a state of confusion
Spirits singing out loud from within
Do I carry on with tattered and torn dreams
Do I lift my heart so my spirit can once again sing
Do I look toward the heavens and watch the stars dance overhead
Where do I turn when my world is Cold once again
Hear the Wind sing out listen to the cries of the birds
Stand up with the pride so your voice will be heard
Let no one clip your wings or tie you down
Long as you can stand forever tall and proud
Ignited with the Passion to end this life
Standing upon the Mountain watching the stars light the sky
Still without Hope or not hearing the song of the wind
Lost in a state of confusion
Spirits singing out loud from within
Do I carry on with tattered and torn dreams
Do I lift my heart so my spirit can once again sing
Do I look toward the heavens and watch the stars dance overhead
Where do I turn when my world is Cold once again
Hear the Wind sing out listen to the cries of the birds
Stand up with the pride so your voice will be heard
Let no one clip your wings or tie you down
Long as you can stand forever tall and proud
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6/15/2010 5:14 PM PDT
This is an awesome idea!!! Hold on, let me write a story about my depressing elementry life. =)
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6/14/2010 11:28 AM PDT
I know what you mean Vienna sometimes the only thing that feels right at that exact moment is to be stubborn despite whether or not it is right or wrong.
6/12/2010 1:14 PM PDT
I think the this project is interesting, and sounds totally fun as well. I think it was great writing something about this.
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6/10/2010 3:49 PM PDT
I still numbly remember the first guy I fell to hard for. I wasn;t smart about it and we could have been friends if I actually talked to him but instead I ignored him when he talked to me and I regret every second of doing it.
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6/3/2010 7:41 PM PDT
I liked this project very much, was fun to write and its nice that there wasn't any specific guidlines
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5/26/2010 2:02 PM PDT
i really enjoy writing on this project as i like to help others! so thanks for the invite i shall keep writing!
bigs smiles to all!!
bigs smiles to all!!
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5/26/2010 12:12 PM PDT
This project is awsome thanks for the invite I'll be sure to post something soon
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5/25/2010 11:53 AM PDT
Thanks invisablekid =]
5/24/2010 4:04 PM PDT
I love how you wrote this project...."We've all been lost, all felt like outcasts and misfits. We'll all felt alone, scared and depressed. But if there's so many of us, what is there to hide?" I love it!!!
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5/16/2010 3:40 AM PDT
thanks for the invitee (:
Ive just came off hoilday and i dont have much time atm so as soon as I can, I'll write somethingg
Ive just came off hoilday and i dont have much time atm so as soon as I can, I'll write somethingg
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5/13/2010 12:07 PM PDT
Cool
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5/12/2010 6:54 PM PDT
Thanks for the invite! I'll have to decline you due to limited hard drive space on my computer, but I'll follow along as time permits.
Travis
Travis
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