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Lost Soul Prophet: A Soldier's Thoughts
I have no favorite author, nor do I have a favorite poet. I was inspired to write poetry at a young age. I have been through many ups and downs in my life. The things that have happened have given me the perspective and forthought I have today.
I have many different views about many different subjects. Ranging from; love, death, religion, and just the everyday struggle to ensure my own sanity. I just hope that I can share some of my work, inspire others, and possibly make a difference in so ... more »
I have many different views about many different subjects. Ranging from; love, death, religion, and just the everyday struggle to ensure my own sanity. I just hope that I can share some of my work, inspire others, and possibly make a difference in so ... more »
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1/14/2012 6:48 PM PST
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1/14/2012 8:45 AM PST
9/12/2009 8:08 PM PDT
This sounds cool. :D
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8/26/2009 4:25 PM PDT
Your poetry is really enjoyable to read. Thank You!
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4/20/2009 9:46 PM PDT
Publish, publish!!! Seriously. Go on Oprah or do whatever you have to do. It's so much different than everyone else's mushy gobbledygook. ~jess
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4/20/2009 3:50 PM PDT
You're amazing...publish this. That is all.
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4/20/2009 10:15 AM PDT
good luck :D publish
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4/20/2009 7:32 AM PDT
good luck daniel!
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4/20/2009 7:28 AM PDT
best of luck!
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4/20/2009 7:25 AM PDT
good luck!
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4/20/2009 7:22 AM PDT
good luck
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4/19/2009 10:41 PM PDT
Get it out there, publish please. There is excellent range and beauty here. All the poems are well thought out and allow the reader to experiance a range of emotions, questions, and a wonder about what humanity hath lent unto itself.
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4/19/2009 1:34 PM PDT
i wish you the best of luck, we are all talented in so many beautiful ways..... i voted publish !!!
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4/16/2009 9:10 AM PDT
Brilliant
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4/15/2009 8:43 PM PDT
Very good stuff, especially Sorrow and Chess.
Good luck!
Good luck!
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4/15/2009 7:56 PM PDT
good luck [=
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4/15/2009 7:41 PM PDT
I haven't had a chance to read them all but I did read the ones in the vote zone and a couple of others and I have to say SORROW is wonderful. I was in the military for quite some time and I have friends who were part of Desert Storm.
Thumbs up to you. I hope this gets published because it is a wonderful tribute to all those who fought and are still at war.
Wonderful work, Lody.
Thumbs up to you. I hope this gets published because it is a wonderful tribute to all those who fought and are still at war.
Wonderful work, Lody.
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4/15/2009 10:22 AM PDT
Great reflections in a thought-provoking collection.
Good Luck. nancy
Good Luck. nancy
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4/14/2009 11:06 PM PDT
Vote yes !! ~c
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4/14/2009 5:45 PM PDT
I would hope that your poems would inspire hope in the process of peace.
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4/14/2009 5:39 PM PDT
Any tribute for our brothers and sisters in arms who risk their lives fighting for our right to be here to leave feedback on your work is definitely worth my vote.
Consider this my way of thanking you for all you have done for our nation! You are appreciated.
Travis
Consider this my way of thanking you for all you have done for our nation! You are appreciated.
Travis
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4/14/2009 5:36 PM PDT
Thumbs up!
Travis
Travis
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4/14/2009 12:00 PM PDT
Definitely a thumbs up from me! It's nice to see how complete this collection has become since I read it first.
The themes vary from the struggle of fighting in a war, to love and meditations on our world. The poems are all universal and applicable to all, and at the same time, they open the doors to unique souls with very unique challenges, passions, and desires.
There is hope even in the darkest of poems, and your use of language, both current and more archaic, is excellent. You also bring in the sun, the moon, to make it all the more interesting.
"Heavy is the Head that Wears the Crown" is superb (one of my favorites.
Overall: easy to read, the poems flow, your speakers share very deep personal experiences without falling into self-pity, your speaker's provide hope.
The themes vary from the struggle of fighting in a war, to love and meditations on our world. The poems are all universal and applicable to all, and at the same time, they open the doors to unique souls with very unique challenges, passions, and desires.
There is hope even in the darkest of poems, and your use of language, both current and more archaic, is excellent. You also bring in the sun, the moon, to make it all the more interesting.
"Heavy is the Head that Wears the Crown" is superb (one of my favorites.
Overall: easy to read, the poems flow, your speakers share very deep personal experiences without falling into self-pity, your speaker's provide hope.
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4/14/2009 11:54 AM PDT
"Purple Rain" was sadly reassuring and the others I read were very succinct. Thumbs up for content and style.
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4/12/2009 7:10 PM PDT
This has hit home for me,Now being an exwife due to the Iraq war, the emotion of your words shook me to the core.. Good luck!
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4/11/2009 2:28 AM PDT
This is intense, Beautifully written and very emotional. Here's my vote!
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4/10/2009 12:58 PM PDT
Good luck on this one, I voted to publish
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4/10/2009 8:52 AM PDT
Publish
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4/9/2009 9:31 AM PDT
wow, this project is amazing
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4/9/2009 7:25 AM PDT
I voted for thisss!I loved it
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4/9/2009 4:17 AM PDT
You have done a superb job Lody! I hope you make it and get this one published. Good luck !
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4/9/2009 12:38 AM PDT
You have a real gift. I was sorry that you did not get selected after tha last voting round. I hope you do this time. Good Luck and keep up the writing!
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4/8/2009 11:39 AM PDT
Hi, Lody. You know I love your work. I've enveloped myself within your message before. I truly hope and pray that your message is not silenced from the world. Let's just count on you getting published. All the best,
Crys
Crys
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4/8/2009 11:30 AM PDT
I love it Dan!
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4/8/2009 10:15 AM PDT
voting to publish
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4/8/2009 5:38 AM PDT
your a good poet lody they allso ring very true
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4/8/2009 5:14 AM PDT
Sounds good man, I like your style.
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4/8/2009 2:45 AM PDT
God Bless You LODY
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4/8/2009 1:55 AM PDT
Sure, you deserves my vote =)
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4/8/2009 1:30 AM PDT
bst of luck, heres my vote :)
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4/7/2009 11:27 PM PDT
you get my vote. Good luck.
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4/7/2009 8:21 PM PDT
Your wonderful poetry has inspired me and the depth of your feelings run deep. That shows in the excellent poetry you have written here in your book. It's the story behind the lines that make your poetry great. As a friend here on webook told me, "Some of the Best Poems have No Rhyme, but They Have Reason."
I love your poetry. I voted YES. GOOD LUCK my Friend.
Liz
I love your poetry. I voted YES. GOOD LUCK my Friend.
Liz
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4/7/2009 8:15 PM PDT
I am not a big poetry reader BUT once I started reading LODY I did not stop until he did....he's good and is heartfelt
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4/7/2009 6:34 PM PDT
I think all your poems are good, but I'm a little bit confused with the rhyming...should work on that.
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4/7/2009 6:32 PM PDT
wanna tell you I voted...."Publish"....the best of luck!!
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4/7/2009 5:42 PM PDT
Never stop writing! You have a great gift!
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4/7/2009 5:31 PM PDT
Good on you Lody, thumbs up from me, love Wennie xxxhugs
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4/7/2009 5:10 PM PDT
Great reading..... this ought to be published!
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4/7/2009 4:24 PM PDT
You have my vote. Good luck.
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4/7/2009 4:21 PM PDT
You know you've got my vote!
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4/7/2009 4:20 PM PDT
You have my vote for publication!
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4/7/2009 4:16 PM PDT
great work!
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4/7/2009 4:15 PM PDT
definitely!
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4/7/2009 4:14 PM PDT
Here's my vote
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4/7/2009 4:00 PM PDT
Gets my vote.
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4/7/2009 3:54 PM PDT
vote for lody
good luck friend
good luck friend
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4/7/2009 3:44 PM PDT
Your work is very insightful and well written. You got my vote. Good luck!
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4/7/2009 3:33 PM PDT
Got my vote - keep up the good work!
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4/6/2009 5:56 PM PDT
Your writing is awesome!! Keep up the good work!!
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4/6/2009 5:00 PM PDT
I've read every one of you poems and love them all. I hope you hit it lucky.
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4/6/2009 4:05 PM PDT
good luck bro!
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4/6/2009 3:33 PM PDT
You are a very good writer I love your style. I voted for you please vote for my book "King Loverr: Diary of a Philosophical Loner.
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4/6/2009 3:23 PM PDT
LOL did it again!!!!
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4/6/2009 3:04 PM PDT
Good luck Lody!!!
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4/6/2009 3:04 PM PDT
im jess hi i liked it lot!!!!!!
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4/6/2009 2:26 PM PDT
You should publish these beneficial poems.
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4/6/2009 1:54 PM PDT
Thumbs up from me, great writing. Wish you the best of luck for publishing.
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4/6/2009 12:15 PM PDT
I am in love with this book. Good luck.
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4/6/2009 11:35 AM PDT
Voted good Luck.
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4/6/2009 9:17 AM PDT
great hearted wrok my friend god bless mike
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4/6/2009 7:52 AM PDT
Good Luck!
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4/6/2009 7:49 AM PDT
proud of you uncle daniel, hope you win!
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4/6/2009 7:46 AM PDT
good luck uncle daniel!
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4/6/2009 7:43 AM PDT
hope you win Daniel my erder berder
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4/6/2009 7:32 AM PDT
Good luck Dan!
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4/6/2009 7:28 AM PDT
good luck and i hope you get this published!
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1/6/2009 5:26 PM PST
this collection was thought provoking, heartbreaking, and memorable....I don't usually read poetry but was moved to do so on these and could not stop til finished! Got my vote!...P
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11/22/2008 9:49 PM PST
Good Day
I hope that you - being one of the 25 who were supposed to be included as one of the winners of the vote process will complain - there were 540 projects in the competition - 54 were supposed to be chosen but webook took less than half in order to cut their work load. They told me that they chose ten percent of the projects which received more than 10 votes.
I hope you will let them know, just as i have, what you think of their unethical behavior.
I hope that you - being one of the 25 who were supposed to be included as one of the winners of the vote process will complain - there were 540 projects in the competition - 54 were supposed to be chosen but webook took less than half in order to cut their work load. They told me that they chose ten percent of the projects which received more than 10 votes.
I hope you will let them know, just as i have, what you think of their unethical behavior.
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11/18/2008 7:20 AM PST
think that this work is something that should be shared and seen by everyone..... well done
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11/17/2008 5:00 PM PST
Proud of you, Soldier.
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11/17/2008 2:28 PM PST
this is really awesome work..
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11/15/2008 2:02 PM PST
great good luck!!! hits home
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11/15/2008 3:00 AM PST
they're all great!!!!! love them!!!! really hope u get published keep me updated!!!
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11/14/2008 2:26 PM PST
Got my vote! =]
You now have 112!
You wouldn't mind voting mine aswell would you? :)
Thought yours was great and that I really hope it get's published! You deserve it!
You now have 112!
You wouldn't mind voting mine aswell would you? :)
Thought yours was great and that I really hope it get's published! You deserve it!
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11/13/2008 10:16 PM PST
Got my vote! You must be heard! Beautiful insight into the experience of a soldier. Your words are honest, your language simple and to the point, but filled with the beauty of your feelings. Thanks for your work, both on battlefield and on the written page!
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11/13/2008 9:03 PM PST
they all really good
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11/13/2008 9:02 PM PST
it's really good
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11/13/2008 7:14 PM PST
A truly wonderful book!!!
and a truly talented writer:):):)
Love it!
and a truly talented writer:):):)
Love it!
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11/13/2008 3:43 PM PST
As I read more of your poems I am in awe of the words you so truly feel and express so vividly. It is obvious you are a very talented writer. Kudos to you son!
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11/13/2008 3:33 PM PST
Lody-
A the mother of a Marine I am truly inspired by this poem in particular. I have read several of your poems and I really think this is one of the best! Keep up the great work! I had my son read it and he says Oorah! Hope you get these published but my vote is ABSOLUTELY YES :)
A the mother of a Marine I am truly inspired by this poem in particular. I have read several of your poems and I really think this is one of the best! Keep up the great work! I had my son read it and he says Oorah! Hope you get these published but my vote is ABSOLUTELY YES :)
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11/13/2008 3:07 PM PST
I love your writing style and how your words follow each other. I will read some more of your other works later on today. Keep it up. My vote: Publish
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11/13/2008 1:29 PM PST
So I've gone through a few of your submissions and I'm really diggin' what I'm reading.
Fear - great rythym - fear of disease - easily expressed without using too many words.
Purple Rain - Very powerful words - Deep but enjoyable.
Greed - SO TRUE! Very easy to relate to.
Envy - Ah, probably my favorite so far.
"I wish I had something more. Just like someone else"
Indeed the grass isn't always greener on the other side.
Lust - The devil need not be impressed. Great line to end the poem.
Anger - GREAT write! I like how you write of the problem from one source and how the same person who caused the problem can easily be fixed by them.
So far, I enjoy reading your work. I'll stop back again to read the rest.
You've got a vote from me!
Fear - great rythym - fear of disease - easily expressed without using too many words.
Purple Rain - Very powerful words - Deep but enjoyable.
Greed - SO TRUE! Very easy to relate to.
Envy - Ah, probably my favorite so far.
"I wish I had something more. Just like someone else"
Indeed the grass isn't always greener on the other side.
Lust - The devil need not be impressed. Great line to end the poem.
Anger - GREAT write! I like how you write of the problem from one source and how the same person who caused the problem can easily be fixed by them.
So far, I enjoy reading your work. I'll stop back again to read the rest.
You've got a vote from me!
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11/13/2008 11:54 AM PST
I disagree with your view of All Hallow Eve. Samhain is a time of reflection, of looking back on over last year, of coming to terms with the phenomenon of life over which wehave no control-death.The Wiccan feel that on this night the separation betweemthe physical and the spiritual realities is thin. Wiccans remember their ancestors and all those who have gone before. Most people have been programed over the past 300 years or more to believe Halloween is an Evil time. This ignorance caused the lives of Millions of innocent people. This saddens me. But it's an issue not up for debat. We are brought up with our own belief structures past down through the generations. Good luck with your book. Last comment.
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11/13/2008 11:50 AM PST
Got my vote, go for it!
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11/13/2008 11:38 AM PST
I love your style, straight to the point with an arrow to the heart.
Well said. I agree.
Well said. I agree.
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11/13/2008 11:37 AM PST
Very well written and with such intense feelings.
I like this poem too. In fact If I read them all through,
which I'm sure I would do if your book is published, I
would love them all.
I like this poem too. In fact If I read them all through,
which I'm sure I would do if your book is published, I
would love them all.
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11/13/2008 11:33 AM PST
Very well said. I completely agree.
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11/13/2008 11:32 AM PST
Bravo. I would love for you to add this to my book of poetry here on webook, " Death For What It's Worth. " plan to submit it in the next round along with " Down Life's Road," Add a poem there as well if you like. I would appreciate it.
You are very talented.
You are very talented.
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11/13/2008 11:28 AM PST
I love this one Lody. You have captured your thoughts and feeling completely. Great writing.
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11/13/2008 11:25 AM PST
Lody, This is very well written and I can feel you pain and frustration. I suppose I'm more of a long winded poet,writer and speaker. I did read all the above poems which were good. But I favor the one here. To me it is far the best.
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11/13/2008 11:17 AM PST
I'm not very good with poetry, but what I read was pretty interesting
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11/13/2008 10:37 AM PST
I can't believe this is my first time actually reading your work. ...absolutely amazing. May God bless you in all of your endeavors, now and forever. Much love and respect...,
Crys
Crys
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11/13/2008 9:55 AM PST
I'm not a big fan of poetry but I like what what you have done here thumbs up
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11/13/2008 8:15 AM PST
I ran through the whole collection, and am impressed. If I had to choose; I prefer the rhyming poems... Free verse is fine, but I have always used rhyming, and am probably a tad biased!
Exceptional stuff ... a thumbs up from me!
Best of Luck!
Exceptional stuff ... a thumbs up from me!
Best of Luck!
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11/13/2008 7:28 AM PST
You have my vote! PEACE
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11/13/2008 5:34 AM PST
Thumbs up from me mate.
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11/13/2008 5:09 AM PST
Check Out, Life And The Spirit From My Perspective. I really need the votes. You have my thumbs up.
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11/13/2008 4:47 AM PST
Thumbs Up! With ref. to Greed. Simplex and to the point. Good
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11/13/2008 4:05 AM PST
like the phrase "heavy is the head that wears the crown."
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11/13/2008 2:26 AM PST
great piece could u read my work 2 please
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11/13/2008 1:20 AM PST
Voted
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11/13/2008 12:22 AM PST
This is very powerful and moving poetry. Both reflection and Heavy is the head that wears a crown really evoked emotion and thought in me. Beautiful writing of heavy subjects! You'll be getting my vote!
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11/12/2008 11:45 PM PST
This has some nice touches. I liked "Actions may scream but don't make a sound" It will reverberate with me all day I think!
Good luck :)
Good luck :)
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11/12/2008 11:41 PM PST
v.powerful stuff esp heavy is the head, good luck and thumbs up
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11/12/2008 11:28 PM PST
I don't believe in much people
but you should make it to the top
Publish is what i voted
but you should make it to the top
Publish is what i voted
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11/12/2008 11:26 PM PST
that's nice!
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11/12/2008 11:19 PM PST
a vote
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11/12/2008 9:18 PM PST
Although I don't share some of the beliefs you put in your poems, at least your mesage is clear. Your poems aren't that long yet very straight to the point. Nice work, you deserve my vote.
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11/12/2008 8:36 PM PST
wow!
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11/12/2008 8:35 PM PST
i like the thought of it. :)
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11/12/2008 8:19 PM PST
I like it, it's so true. Good Luck
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11/12/2008 7:45 PM PST
Wow! I read Purple Rain and I really liked it... I also liked the others i read... Greed and Fear... Keep up the good work and good luck!
Chance
Chance
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11/12/2008 7:44 PM PST
nice work
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11/12/2008 7:22 PM PST
I think I like the rhyming poems the best. Rhythm is good there. You have covered a lot of ground with your thoughts and the poems that need a bit of work can be rewritten before final publication. Very good work. You're a deep thinker.
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11/12/2008 6:42 PM PST
I recommend extensive reading of classic poetry, to learn about the various kinds of rhyme-scheme and meter that have been explored. It is amazing how much a little reading can tend to improve a poet's capacity for expression...
As Dylan Thomas said, and here I'll paraphrase: the goal of the poet is to represent reality as he experiences it as accurately as possible.
A love of words, of meter, of language is the vehicle via which the poet accomplishes this task. I recommend further study in its operation.
As Dylan Thomas said, and here I'll paraphrase: the goal of the poet is to represent reality as he experiences it as accurately as possible.
A love of words, of meter, of language is the vehicle via which the poet accomplishes this task. I recommend further study in its operation.
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11/12/2008 6:12 PM PST
Usually I'm not the biggest fan of rhyming, as it sounds too sing-song when used incorrectly. Obviously you have put a lot of thought into how you want it to sound and it works flawlessly.
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11/12/2008 6:11 PM PST
wow, I love the diction and great, subtle rhyming.
Nice job!!
Nice job!!
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11/12/2008 6:05 PM PST
Okay I should say you make a great poet. Well done. :-) Thumbs up from me. Best of luck.
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11/12/2008 6:04 PM PST
you would make a great poet.
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11/12/2008 6:00 PM PST
Really enjoyed "heavy is the head that wears the crown".
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11/12/2008 5:58 PM PST
INteresting choice to have the seven deadly sins in the beginning, and the messages in them combined with your choice to hve them in the beginning makes them seem almost like a warning.
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11/12/2008 5:55 PM PST
Little typo. You need to check your tenses on this one "Pride" . That line in the middle doesn't run smooth cuz the tenses change.
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11/12/2008 5:52 PM PST
"purple rain" that title remeinds meof the song.
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11/12/2008 5:49 PM PST
This poem makes me wonder. They say that certain experiences demonstrate our true colors, but is it possible that we have no color at all until experiences leave us tainted with the color of the experience itself? Just a thought, but interesting work again.
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11/12/2008 5:49 PM PST
as a former 101st medic so true brother keep on an hook up
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11/12/2008 5:46 PM PST
how true that is
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11/12/2008 5:45 PM PST
great work
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11/12/2008 5:29 PM PST
Wishing you good luck on this!! A big Thumbs-Up from me.
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11/12/2008 5:20 PM PST
I have read several of your pieces and like them, especially because they are meaty subjects. We are at a time in American history when the people are suffering and may find solice in work that expresses what they endure. Good Luck, Dixie Ann
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11/12/2008 5:10 PM PST
It's quite good
the 3rd lines a bit off rhythm
You have talent
the 3rd lines a bit off rhythm
You have talent
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11/12/2008 5:08 PM PST
Wow!....I am not a huge fan of poetry, tho' I pen a line here and there too, but I read this complete work before glancing at a yet unread synopsis.
These poems opened my gut - from love to betrayal to love, from peace to war to sacrifice.
I was and am deeply moved....Paula Shene
These poems opened my gut - from love to betrayal to love, from peace to war to sacrifice.
I was and am deeply moved....Paula Shene
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11/12/2008 5:04 PM PST
Well written and powerful...every single word cuts through straight to the soul. My favorite 'Below the Surface'.
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11/12/2008 5:03 PM PST
I really like your work, Lody.There is such an honesty about it. Each poem that I read has a good stand-alone quality. lovely. Welldone.
I don't know if you had a chance to look at my children's story, but would appreciate a viewing.
All the best.
Cx
I don't know if you had a chance to look at my children's story, but would appreciate a viewing.
All the best.
Cx
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11/12/2008 4:59 PM PST
As a soldier myself I can relate to it. Great job!
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11/12/2008 4:37 PM PST
all of them are great - my favorite of all of them was purple rain, nice beat - it flowed through my soul
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11/12/2008 4:33 PM PST
I think, "heavy is the head that wears the crown" is an exceptional piece. Written excellently, flows well, really good work!
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11/12/2008 4:30 PM PST
This is so true and it is said beautifully and clearly, the choice of wording is very good. I also find that brevity works really well,as in this poem, when trying to hit home a strong point!
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11/12/2008 4:27 PM PST
Great literature to read.
I hope you have lots of luck.
God bless
Elena
I hope you have lots of luck.
God bless
Elena
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11/12/2008 4:16 PM PST
I really liked it, I just read the vote zone stuff but I like it and I'm not normally much of a poetry guy but good work.
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11/12/2008 4:09 PM PST
Whilst I admit that I didn't read every poem in this submission, those that I did have time to read were impressive enough to get my vote. I particularly enjoyed the way that the poetry flows with a coherent rhythmic sense reminiscent of song lyrics. The subject matter is also interesting, particularly the expression of the seven deadly sins. When I saw the title, Purple Rain, I was immediately reminded of the song written by Prince.
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11/12/2008 4:08 PM PST
voted!
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11/12/2008 3:44 PM PST
Very thoughtful. Good Luck!
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11/12/2008 3:43 PM PST
You're very talented my friend. I was delighted with what I read, I voted to publish.
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11/12/2008 3:42 PM PST
i didnt have time to look at it all, but after about 5 I knew this stuff is very good! i like how each emotion gets a small poem! well done
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11/12/2008 3:41 PM PST
Beautiful poem :)
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11/12/2008 3:36 PM PST
Wonderful writing! This has much food for thought. Peace.
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11/12/2008 3:34 PM PST
I'm not the best person to critique poetry, but I beleive it is good poetry when you can make the reader feel what you are feeling. You accomplish this beautifuly, so you have my vote. Good luck!
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11/12/2008 3:26 PM PST
Okay that was good, have voted thumbs up for you!
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11/12/2008 3:02 PM PST
Another well written poem. Your poetry is written from your
heat.
heat.
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11/12/2008 2:58 PM PST
I loved this poem. I don't think anyone can describe fear in
a better manner of speaking.
I look forward to seeing your work published.
a better manner of speaking.
I look forward to seeing your work published.
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11/12/2008 2:56 PM PST
Got my vote love your style keep going. your doing so well. I really hope it gets published.
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11/12/2008 2:45 PM PST
got mine too, good luck
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11/12/2008 10:24 AM PST
Voted possitive my friend
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11/11/2008 12:30 PM PST
Good luck. You have my vote.
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11/11/2008 10:43 AM PST
The poems in here, not just the content, but also the way it was written was glorious. I wish you luck my friend; you have my thumbs up!
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11/11/2008 5:11 AM PST
I really like this. :) Simple and Sweet
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11/11/2008 3:25 AM PST
Nice work! here's my vote
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11/10/2008 11:34 PM PST
you got my vote ..very clean
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11/10/2008 10:04 PM PST
Nice work, smooth and to the point, good luck
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11/10/2008 9:20 PM PST
Brilliant work. love the passion behind the words . love the imagery it portrays. you have a wonderful way of words that draws the emotions out. Great work
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11/10/2008 8:27 PM PST
Awesome work!!!!
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11/10/2008 8:25 PM PST
Good luck with this vote
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11/10/2008 6:10 PM PST
Wow! I must say, that impresses me!
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11/10/2008 6:10 PM PST
I think there awesome thank you for showing them tome. Your poems have alot of patential, honesty, passion, and inspiration. I love them you know you have my vote as an publish!
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11/10/2008 5:58 PM PST
I like the way you word your poems, and you choose very open sujects that a reader can easily put into their own experience. I like these even though I only read a few of them. Keep writing and hopefully you'll come check out some of my poems,
http://www.webook.com/project/Poems-and-Thoughts-of-a-Teenage-Girl
Again good job :) Aniytlia
http://www.webook.com/project/Poems-and-Thoughts-of-a-Teenage-Girl
Again good job :) Aniytlia
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11/10/2008 5:07 PM PST
Voted<publish baby publish>
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11/10/2008 4:49 PM PST
This is powerful stuff. Truly some of the most profound poetry I've seen on webook thus far.
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11/10/2008 4:36 PM PST
you got my vote!
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11/10/2008 3:19 PM PST
Yes!
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11/9/2008 2:56 PM PST
God bless be the best you can I ;like your work mike god bless
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11/9/2008 2:55 PM PST
Greed is the woprst of human life great work mike
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11/9/2008 2:54 PM PST
Both sides lose in war god bless mike
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11/9/2008 2:54 PM PST
very good mike
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11/9/2008 2:39 PM PST
Voted to PUBLISH! Good luck!!
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11/7/2008 1:58 PM PST
Of course you should get published. I want a copy for the bedside. I love your writing!!!! Keep up the good work hun.
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11/7/2008 8:38 AM PST
You've have some really great poetry Daniel! I hope you can get more of it published.
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11/6/2008 9:44 PM PST
a vote for you,
my friend
my friend
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11/5/2008 8:20 PM PST
Clearly you already know how I feel. Keep writing!! :) And when your book gets made I better get one of the first signed copies!
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11/5/2008 7:35 PM PST
I really like this. I think you are a fantastic person. That is very obvious. So I vote yes.
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11/5/2008 7:23 PM PST
Neat, catchy little poem. I like it.
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11/5/2008 9:45 AM PST
you really need as many votes as you can get!!! this is amazing! i will tell so many more people about this. surely they will vote for you! great job and good luck. vote for me as well!!
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9/30/2008 5:36 PM PDT
wow this is good.you can tell this has substance
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8/20/2008 12:26 PM PDT
I like all of the pieces you have in here (so far at least. I don't know if you plan on adding more.)
But your thoughts are read clearly and can be relatable. They're very powerful, too.
But your thoughts are read clearly and can be relatable. They're very powerful, too.
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