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Love, You Fill A World
These three poems display a side of love that transcends the highs and the lows, and covers a passage of years, and the depths true love can reach.
the first poems is based upon an actual dream I had as a teenager, one that I feel was visionary/prophetic.
The second is a romantic fantasy of the perfect honeymoon.
The third is a poem about a peach and I won't say more than that here; read it and enjoy.
the first poems is based upon an actual dream I had as a teenager, one that I feel was visionary/prophetic.
The second is a romantic fantasy of the perfect honeymoon.
The third is a poem about a peach and I won't say more than that here; read it and enjoy.
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8/31/2009 12:21 PM PDT
I'm late lol because I was SURPRISED so many came by my own 3 poems, for I never went off asking people to check it out. I thought it'd die off sometime. Thanks to you for doing so! (This is copied and pasted onto other 3 poem works I've also missed. HEEHEE:D)
The last one had a nice effect on me...felt more rhythmic and lyrical. I understand the peach, but...I felt a lil grossed out lol!
The last one had a nice effect on me...felt more rhythmic and lyrical. I understand the peach, but...I felt a lil grossed out lol!
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8/31/2009 4:42 AM PDT
WOW! Very rich in experience, description and music! Straight to the Publishing House!
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8/31/2009 4:22 AM PDT
Your work is amazing, I admire how you put these three together so brilliantly...you definitely have my vote and blessings, love Wennie xxxhugs
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8/30/2009 3:51 AM PDT
Juicy.
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8/29/2009 11:50 PM PDT
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8/29/2009 7:06 PM PDT
These poems get a definite thumbs up from me, my WEbook friend. Allie and I wish you all the luck there can be.
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8/29/2009 1:51 PM PDT
Imagery:
beaitiful power reimagery great moving content
Good luck god bless mike
beaitiful power reimagery great moving content
Good luck god bless mike
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8/27/2009 10:43 AM PDT
Remarkable
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8/24/2009 7:57 AM PDT
Good enough to be published. Voted.
And if you have the time, check out mine...
http://www.webook.com/project/Animal-Cruelty
And if you have the time, check out mine...
http://www.webook.com/project/Animal-Cruelty
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8/22/2009 12:08 AM PDT
3 great poems. The world of romance, love, cherished in thoughts. You have my vote - Publish!
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8/21/2009 11:54 AM PDT
Publish!
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8/19/2009 6:35 AM PDT
Just wanted to say that I've voted to publish, but again, terrific work. Thank you.
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8/18/2009 7:09 PM PDT
I blush, feeling all the voyeur, and finish reading even more voraciously!
You have my vote.
You have my vote.
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8/16/2009 6:43 PM PDT
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8/16/2009 10:19 AM PDT
These are absolutely amazing :)
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8/15/2009 2:29 AM PDT
You bring the scene to life so well, a yes vote
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8/12/2009 4:01 AM PDT
Imagery:
I think the images you bring to life in Remember Me are some of the best I have read on this poetry competition.
Good Luck.
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition
If you have time.
I think the images you bring to life in Remember Me are some of the best I have read on this poetry competition.
Good Luck.
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition
If you have time.
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8/9/2009 8:09 PM PDT
I think all three of your poems in your competition project are worthy of a PUBLISH vote. The diversity of subjects is, in my estimation, the sign of a great writer in that it shows great knowledge of a variety of subjects. Much success in the vote process. Thanks for sharing and posting your work.
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8/8/2009 8:42 AM PDT
The Peach:
It was very good. again with the amazing imagery, a clear picture. Through all poems you had great grammar and no spelling mistakes. Fantastic :)
P.S please remeber me was my favourite.
You got my vote
:D
It was very good. again with the amazing imagery, a clear picture. Through all poems you had great grammar and no spelling mistakes. Fantastic :)
P.S please remeber me was my favourite.
You got my vote
:D
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8/8/2009 8:38 AM PDT
Please Remeber Me:
I really really like this one. You are brilliant with the imagery again! The sight the smells, it all becomes so real. Its is really amazing, a Yes from me.
I really really like this one. You are brilliant with the imagery again! The sight the smells, it all becomes so real. Its is really amazing, a Yes from me.
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8/8/2009 8:35 AM PDT
Long May The Lover Linger In The Lilac Tinted Moonbeams:
Well, what can i say. whoo. So much imeragry, little too much for me but i suppose i am only 14. But i loved the romantic sense around it and the urgency. So emotional. and the imergary was brilliant, i esp love the opening, setting the scene. Well Done. :)
Well, what can i say. whoo. So much imeragry, little too much for me but i suppose i am only 14. But i loved the romantic sense around it and the urgency. So emotional. and the imergary was brilliant, i esp love the opening, setting the scene. Well Done. :)
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8/8/2009 5:39 AM PDT
Publish.
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8/8/2009 5:22 AM PDT
voted for this one.
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8/7/2009 6:04 PM PDT
Amazing. You've got my vote.
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8/6/2009 1:21 PM PDT
The Peach is brilliant! Good Luck!
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8/5/2009 8:14 AM PDT
Include my vote in your quest for publication by all means.
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8/3/2009 11:42 AM PDT
I voted for you.
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8/3/2009 5:42 AM PDT
My vote is in. Best of luck to you.
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8/3/2009 4:47 AM PDT
You got my vote. Very good pieces.
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8/2/2009 9:21 PM PDT
You're a whacked out babe!
Love your stuff
Saw some other shit too.
Great
Its a publish for me
Love your stuff
Saw some other shit too.
Great
Its a publish for me
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8/2/2009 2:36 PM PDT
You have my vote.
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8/2/2009 1:34 PM PDT
The Peach is a wonderful reminder of all that we can experience when we stay in the moment, aware of all that surrounds us.
Good luck.
Good luck.
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8/2/2009 12:56 PM PDT
General:
:)
Imagery:
My favorite was the peach...it paints a very clear picture.
:)
Imagery:
My favorite was the peach...it paints a very clear picture.
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8/2/2009 1:40 AM PDT
A yes vote.
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8/1/2009 10:31 PM PDT
General:
Voted
Form:
Long May The Love Linger: A beautifully written erotica poem that just is one fantastic read, a vision of words and I really like this one
Voted
Form:
Long May The Love Linger: A beautifully written erotica poem that just is one fantastic read, a vision of words and I really like this one
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8/1/2009 9:49 PM PDT
i just voted for you. good luck!
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8/1/2009 8:16 PM PDT
You have my vote.
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8/1/2009 6:27 PM PDT
Good luck with voting! I wll definitely vote publish. Like i've said before, i really appreciate and enjoy how diverse your writing is. My favorite of the three The Peach :).
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8/1/2009 5:38 PM PDT
Content:
the content of your art shows depth--shows soul.
i vote that you art be published.
the content of your art shows depth--shows soul.
i vote that you art be published.
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8/1/2009 2:22 PM PDT
I've voted here. good luck
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8/1/2009 12:17 PM PDT
got my vote.
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8/1/2009 12:00 PM PDT
Really dynamic and full..great talent shows here in these three poems but the first is the one I like the most.
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8/1/2009 9:08 AM PDT
Love all three poems. Peach reminds me of days on the farms; Remember Me, I thought it was going to be about 9-11, but turn out to be a strange dream that ends with hope; Long May the Love Linger was like peeking at a newlywed's many feelings of love, desire and decisions about sexual advances towards his new bride.
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8/1/2009 1:52 AM PDT
Looks like all comments appear for all poems - this second is a great poem transcending parallels. Wonderful, and I really really think something of yours should be published ... it won't be a webook poetry book without it! Great job on all three.
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8/1/2009 1:51 AM PDT
General:
Ah yes that old peach ... loved loved it loved it
Tone:
whimsical in the guise of maturity (that''s a good thing)
Ah yes that old peach ... loved loved it loved it
Tone:
whimsical in the guise of maturity (that''s a good thing)
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