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Seems a great effort and tremendous talent ...

Those are one of the best poems i ve read on here .
great work and amazing use of mythology.

I liked them all. But thought the first one could be a bit long and drawn out. it is good don't et me wrong, but as i wen through the poem I found myself drifting from it. Not your intent or your fault, but I guess it's just not my cup of tes. Very good and great imagry. good luck

Very wonderful, great imagery and use of personification. Publish for sure.

She places her soft young heart in his tender hands
Where once she dreamed of sea foam and pomegranates
Now hot white fingers of intensity wrap a flaming grip
Around her waist, and pull her into the inferno

I truly enjoyed the above poem that led to this last stanza.  The imagery here is all consuming.  All three poems are really well written.  I so enjoy reading peotry from the UK and other places abroad.  You say you enjoy the oldfashioned. I do as well.  I think of Knights of Old and Shakespeare, Kings and Queens, anyway I vote publish!  Good luck
Niyahlove
http://www.webook.com/project/Pain-of-another

Unique and original poetry.
Keep up your great work,
good luck with the vote.
You`ll have mine:)

Another of my favorite sets!  Brilliant work!

The Storm of Damascus is such a remarkable piece, it has the perfect balance, stunning imagery, and of course your impeccable vocabulary and grammar. All your pieces are equally good, but out of imagery and story "The Storm of Damascus" is my favorite hands down. Good luck! Publish 100%.

You know my thoughts on your works my friend, truly astonishing!!!!

A use of language that makes me feel like English is my second language not my first, lol.

The very very best of luck with the vote, no question that you should be published.

http://www.webook.com/project/My-3-Emotive-Entries

Three very good poems.

Good luck.


http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition


If you have time.

Finally Poetry that has correct spelling, a story, and fantastic Imagery. I was beginning to get lost in the quagmire of muck here. Thanks!   A very emphatic yes vote.

Tone:
tone, content, musicality, form...

a great collection.

Amazing work. The diction and rhythem flowed perfectly, and I am happy to read your work whenever you ask.

The poem sucked me right in from the very first few words. Very descriptive and nice flow. This most certainly should be published! ^^

i voted

I voted for you

You know I love these. You know which is my favorite. You know I'm voting for you. :)

http://www.webook.com/project/In-Times-Of-Love-There-Were

Excellent, poetry I can sink my teeth into (although that frightens my children and harms my monitor).

*thumbs up*

PUBLISH, PUBLISH, such originality and creativity, three very unique and well penned entries, good luck to you and thumbs up from me :)

yes, PUBLISH!


Just in case...

http://www.webook.com/poetry.aspx?p=e2ea412de1584a449563cdef32bcfce5&sit=bda9fdb9857e4b51a0cd007c0c285858

good work i wish you every success


http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles

Great imagery and flow! Good luck!

Like i said when i left feedback the other week, these were amazing, i am so glad i came across them. Got my vote. Good Luck

Sarah

Nice work
I voted! How about you? Have you voted?

Total disclaimer: mythology is not my thing, so try as I might, a lot of this went over my head. I had to re-read the poem a few times, and I actually like that about the piece. Poetry IS the process of re-reading, and one can only hope it prompts a reader to pause and think (and even look things up--I did!). In form and content, your poems seem to take cues from the modern period--of pound and eliot. When older forms were being challenged with new language and ideas but doing so within the bounds of what was known and loved among readers. This is a difficult piece. At first, I was not sure that all the large, grand words you use were really intentional to the and necessary (perhaps a bit of showing off). But in fact, they all work within the themes and content of the poem. I like the repetitive imagery of drinking and general indulgences. It fits the title, and thus what I assume you are going for very well. I still leave this poem not exactly sure what is happening and why you tell the story you do, but that is okay. It makes me want to return, and that is something truly special. Good work and good luck in the vote! I will be checking out more of your stuff in the meantime!

As I stated before. Brilliant.  Publish. CF

Your poetry has taken to places unknown and exotic through your imagery, not an easy thing to accomplish!

Poetry that takes the reader to a far off place with vivid imagery...I always enjoy the read. All the best Lycaon :)

Brilliant.
Couldn't pick my favorite.They are all well written, deep and very touching.
It would be silly of these were not published to be honest.

x

You have my vote. Good luck in the contest.

Publish.

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Trilogy

Well done, a yes vote from me!

Three very good poems - a yes vote.
Best wishes,
Mike.

http://www.webook.com/project/Verse-Macabre

Got my vote.

It's almost as if your work is a mysterious time-traveller that has transcended the styles of several eras and landed here to create a most unforgettable impression. Adding your work to the anthology will create a unique perspective. Hope to see  you there, you've got my vote!

It's almost as if your work is a mysterious time-traveller that has transcended the styles of several eras and landed here to create a most unforgettable impression. Adding your work to the anthology will create a unique perspective. Hope to see  you there, you've got my vote!

Lycon...there are a lot of Poets on WEbook and their Poetry is good but when I read your Poetry I see an amazing star, it is bright, it has a beautiful glow.  I see that star becoming a star...not an ordinary star but an extraordinary star.  I see it because of your talent, everyone has talent, everybody is gifted but you Lycon are in a class of your own...you make me proud Lycon because your talent is so naturally infused with a depth of passion that moves mountains...never give up writing your dream Lycon, never give up your great enthusiasm because Lycon it is similar to that of our great Poets of our History...you definitely have my vote, love Wennie xxxhugs

As if I could vote for any other!!

of three great poems I See you is the best i think, and that is not easily said. you should be included in the final selection.

You get my vote

good luck...
voted...

DONE! good luck my friend!!

Thanks, Sev. I'm glad there are still some old-school appreciators left !

This is some dense, intense stuff...varied vocabulary and in-depth imagery give the reader a lot to think about. Definitely a little old-school, and all the better for it.  I like your style!