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Annalisea18
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Fiction
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Action/Adventure
Thriller/Suspense
Language:
English

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M.E.N.T.A.L

Alexis Grey is locked away. Her family is dead. Her life ruined and her future.... A disaster. ( Just a note. I know the hospital and Dr.hart seem very unrealistic....And yes i have done research! But there is a reason!!!!!! you just have to wait for it!)

PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Alexis Grey is locked away. Her family is dead. Her life ruined and her future.... A disaster. She sufferes from nightmares...so vivid that they actually hurt her. With help from her only freind...she escapes... and learns the truth about what reallly happened.

© Annalisea 2010

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Sophie_Senn

11/14/2010 11:22 AM PST

This sounds so ominous and mysterious. I love it! Very creepy.

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MichaelFallon

6/29/2010 2:59 PM PDT

General:
Sounds really good, mysterious. Keeps me gussing and wanting to find out what happened, and the picture is even intense.

Plot:
Wants me to find out what happened.

Character Development:
Not so sure, havent read the first chapter, just the description.

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angel1990

5/24/2010 8:02 PM PDT

sounds good....thnx 4 the invite cuz i never would've found it....gonna read it like now!

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ACWillard

5/23/2010 12:22 PM PDT

I need to catch up! lol..i'll get going asap!

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Brooke_Haven

5/7/2010 4:07 PM PDT

It sounds so good!! But, my only question is, in one part of your description of the book, you say "With help from her only friend... she escapes." I just want to be clear. You use the (...) to skip over parts in the description so as not to give things away, or what? If not, then is she escaping from the nightmares?
Thankies :) Defiantly continue with this.

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Emalissa

3/13/2010 8:03 PM PST

Interesting concept.

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Darkhime

3/13/2010 10:19 AM PST

Not bad

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ErinTinkerbell

3/12/2010 3:30 PM PST

ooft, read the first bit, OMG, I'm really into it already! Go you! I will keep reading it!

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ErinTinkerbell

3/12/2010 3:27 PM PST

It sounds really interesting. x

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MissDaniels

3/8/2010 11:42 AM PST

Great title. Great cover. Great story line, and great grammar. 5 *'s

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HaydenMCasey

3/6/2010 11:29 AM PST

I totaled it up, and your story is 25,089 words so far! :) P.S. I lurve it too!

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kidauthor

3/1/2010 4:26 PM PST

love the picture!
Goes great with this, but
is the hosptal like, evil????
I wanna help u

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AJ_Rodriguez

3/1/2010 1:41 PM PST

I think you draw your readers in. And since I keep getting your group thing, I guess I'd better have a look.

~AJR

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Alyss_Grey

2/26/2010 6:02 PM PST

I like it. I think it would be a bit better if the chapters were longer, (yes, I am being a total hypocrite) but I really like it. The characters are very good overall, and I think maybe you could put a bit more detail into Dr. Hart. Why is she such a bitch? No one is evil for the heck of it. Anyway, great story, and just remember not to move to fast in the plot (right now is a good pace). Keep up the good work and I'll see you nect chapter!

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jaspernicklover

2/26/2010 12:57 PM PST

really good, it could use a little more setail but other wise good

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RazielBlack

2/26/2010 1:01 AM PST

Hey

This is for no reason then to bookmark.

I'll be back in a few hours to start my work

Regards

Raz

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Pwincezz_Beadz

2/25/2010 8:48 AM PST

yh i really like it and i think everyone else will like it to.
and all your puctuation is great i like all the words and
everything and i like all the words which sound seriouse.

AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR CHAPTER 7

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Pwincezz_Beadz

2/23/2010 10:21 AM PST

i really, really enjoyed it its so great and interesting but i dont know wat other people would thin but i love it soooooooooo much.

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KellieCutie

2/21/2010 9:54 AM PST

This sounds really good, and I want to read it but it sounds VERY similar to my own story "Awoken". So you might want to read my story description and maybe you or I will think about changing some of the ideas.

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MeenaGal

2/19/2010 3:31 PM PST

why, why do you have to have such interesting stories, and i just don't have the time to read them? i wish i had the time to sit down and read everything, bt the world just wont alow that will they? I can twait i finally get the chance though :D

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Beth_Is_Me

2/19/2010 1:47 PM PST

Dammit you have no idea how much I wish I could sit on the computer for more than five minutes at a time! I really wanna read this as it goes along, but I just can't find the time atm :/
I will find the time soon, though, and I promise i will comment on every chapter you have up by that time.
From what I have seen so far, however, you are a great writer and you should go on to finish this novel ^_^

~Beth xxx

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Ranga

2/18/2010 10:31 PM PST

Sounds intense... =D

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Kaitlyn201

2/17/2010 11:42 PM PST

This sounds great! It seems I love the pic.

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jaspernicklover

2/14/2010 11:43 AM PST

i love this story it is so good. i think that the idea of you having the pictures is a great touch i think it is amanzing

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Lou_

2/11/2010 11:50 PM PST

Exellent story, I love it how you write please write some more because its so fun to read
P . S YOU SHOULD ENTER SOME COMPETITIONS FOR WRITING!
p p s love the picture
p . p . p . s Great Job

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KitKat6

2/9/2010 12:23 PM PST

Excellent story! I like the way you're able to develope each character into their own sterotypical category (not meaning that offensively in anyway). I enjoy the way you started out for it didn't seem like the story was gonna take that turn in anyway.
Definately very good, keep it up :)

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Misunderstood_x

2/5/2010 11:34 AM PST

Wow i love it. and i mean everything about it. i can understand to a certain point how patronising people can be with something like that it's so frustrating and i love the way your able to portray it with such vivid descriptions.
I also love the bond between Alexis and Tyler.
And i will be with out a doubt looking at all the updates up on this.
:)x love it

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zrinka

2/5/2010 6:01 AM PST

From what I read in this little trailer sounds very interesting. Seems quiet different from your other books. Makes me want to find out the truth about her right away!

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annmary

2/4/2010 12:42 PM PST

very nice, i like where u going with the story...

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air_dragon

2/4/2010 11:50 AM PST

very nice.

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Chocoholic

1/31/2010 3:25 AM PST

This is a really good idea, I can't wait to see what you come up with. :)

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MisguidedGhost

1/30/2010 10:39 PM PST

Aw!!!!!!!!!!!!! I remember you talking about this! I'm so excited you finally put it on webook so everyone could read it!!! lol. plot sounds AMAZING. Can not WAIT to read!

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MyLadyAriane

1/30/2010 5:04 PM PST

Sounds like a great idea for a great novel.
You have a lot of talent!!!
You really do!

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henrythomasgirl

1/30/2010 4:57 PM PST

Nice!

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black_flame

1/30/2010 1:59 PM PST

lol I like the title alone ^_^

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kentchapman

1/30/2010 1:55 PM PST

WELL? I'm waiting!!!! It's not finished yet?????
And I did have such high hopes for you! L.O.L. :):):):):):):):)
Thanks for inviting me. I'll look for it in the near future.

K.C.

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