Good work. I enjoyed them. Publish.

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Form:
  I can read yet feel your pain great content

   good luck god bless mike

Good work. Voted.

And if you have time...

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Very well written, good luck with the vote...

Good Luck with the vote.



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If you have the time.

I agree with the reader below, but you have a yes from me. Please return the favor

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Your first two poems, a definite yes.  Although, Maybe...Just Maybe... could do with a bit of editing.

Was should be were.

Passing throughs should be passings through.

Remove the first just in the third line then break theline at air so that the fourth line might read...

Only for my words to fall to the ground.

The sixth line could perhaps be written...

To dust them off and hold them true.

The seventh line could do without the words:  all the time

The eighth line should perhaps be:

A constant echo throughout my soul.

Lastly, I think your ending should reflect your title, phrasing it in that exact manner (Maybe...just maybe...it's over).

As for Seven Ways...  The format deters the reader and the content isn't as penetrating as it could be.

i love the emotion you put into all your poems...
I vote YES!!!


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thank you.

General:
I really liked your first poem 'cycle', but I was not as impressed by the other two of your submissions. I felt they lacked the quality that 'cycle' had.

Form:
The first poem had a good flow and structure. I felt the rhyme worked well in most places, but I do feel you need to add a couple of syllables to a few lines in order to make they rhyme perfect.
Your other two poems lacked a defined form and structure which I found distracting whilst reading.

Content:
I felt that 'cycle' was very rich in content, but the other two were much weaker.
I can understand what you were trying to convey in both of your other submissions, but I feel that you could have achieved this in a much less obvious way.

Imagery:
'Cycle' is a beautiful and dream-like poem. The imagery is very good and it draws the reader in.
I felt the other two poems lacked the imagery which you have demonstrated so well in your first submission.

The stars would not shine without the dark, yngdstn. There are many who appreciate your pain. Have a look at my poem 'Song of Freedom'

LaGoya.

I think your first poem is beautiful not too sure about the second  - could have been another verse from the first really and the third is just complete crap man!  Why you gotta perpetuate this kind of thing?

I get some of this is supposed to be humourous, but most if it is not; it is woe is me.

1.   I don't know what;s going on with the unsupported format

2.   Really?

Incredible and insightful, the last poem holds so much meaning in such little words. A great set of poems and a yes from me.

Three very good poems - a yes vote.
Best wishes,
Mike.

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Great pieces, you got my  vote
Return the favor plz.

Loved the poem but I'm not muck of a poet. I only compose songs.

oh wow im surprised im more of a story writer if im inspired i write a poem

hi how are you going?
thanks for the invite, i'm new to this whole thing and just wanted a place to post some of my stories.
I like the poem by the way, well constructed and portrayed