Book Info
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Project Leader:
LindseyBass
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Participants:
The WEbook community -
Who Can Write:
All Participants -
Category:
Poetry -
Genre:
General -
Language:
English
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Melancholy Musings
Everyone has unique circumstances, but everyone suffers in life. Though perceptions differ, pain, betrayal, hopelessness, and loneliness permeate in every life that is lived on earth. What are your perceptions of the circumstances in your life? Feel free to post a response in any format, whether short story, poetry, etc.
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11/11/2009 11:39 AM PST
finding a path to my understanding.
Wake up one morning and i feel numb from the session ringing of the clock alarm.
Tired and confused, today I don't feel amused.
The sun peaks through the shades as I walk slowly stumbling through another's morning coffee phase.
Sleeping another minute till the aroma of the coffee perks my caffeine crave, my sleepingness warmly fades.
The sun is smiling outside, as I try to understand what is going inside.
Blocking my thoughts, the clouds veils the sun, the path is covered in doubts as I leave behind the bread crums...
Wake up one morning and i feel numb from the session ringing of the clock alarm.
Tired and confused, today I don't feel amused.
The sun peaks through the shades as I walk slowly stumbling through another's morning coffee phase.
Sleeping another minute till the aroma of the coffee perks my caffeine crave, my sleepingness warmly fades.
The sun is smiling outside, as I try to understand what is going inside.
Blocking my thoughts, the clouds veils the sun, the path is covered in doubts as I leave behind the bread crums...
7/3/2009 7:19 PM PDT
i kind of admire this art of work...well done author...it's long but it's worth reading for
6/28/2009 12:17 PM PDT
Thank you guys. I like to share personal poems because they are much more raw than ones you write for other people. I think personal experiences are much easier to relate to than poems centered around cryptic, abstract ideas or ostentatious intellectualism. But you're right...when I wrote 'personal poetry' I wasn't really thinking about the wording. :)
6/24/2009 7:04 AM PDT
Haha, what really brought me in to this project was your subheading, personal poetry, if it was, why put it on here, lol. Great writing my friend, you really do have a good talent there!
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6/12/2009 4:51 AM PDT
Holy crap that is a lot of writing! Well done :P
You are a great poet, I admire your work :)
You are a great poet, I admire your work :)
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