Thank you fubu!  I do love to tell stories...I lied a lot as a child.LOL  And no matter how established you are as a writer your input is greatly appreciated..it's not about experience in the trade...but the enjoyment you get out of what you are reading.  Remember the majority of your audience aren't writers themselves...simply fans of good writing.  Keep at the poetry, I will check you out, if you don't mind.

great work with your writing. you seem have a sense for story telling that captures attention but unfortunately i dont have the criticism to offer as am a beginner story teller. As my thing has always been poetry writing am just learning to make that transition to be able to be the kind of writer you are...good writing.

I am most curious to see what you will write.

Always!

While I am new here, I will do my best to offer helpful feedback.  Perhaps in the future when I begin my own posting, you will do the same.  I only hope that in the future you find my words of criticism both encouraging and insightful.

LOL...this project os to introduce my work and get feedback from readers with different perspectives.  Feel free to comment on any story you see up here.  Thanks!

Hi Alusre,
I thankyou kindly for inviting me to join your project, but i've only recently joined we:book in the last couple of days, and i also am still learning to find my style, i mainly write short poems and stories, and i seem to get carried away on a tangent, when i write, but i will check out your work, and i would like to be your friend. What is the idea of a project is it so as others can have input in your work, or am i getting the wrong end of the stick.
Peace,
FusedFingers.

Thanks Mausa.  Your words are encouraging!

Courage is somthing many of us do not have. But one  has to be courageouse enough,  to  actually achieve more in life. Having  said that, I'm not suggesting that you are not. I think, you are a very courageouse person to have made the first staps in presenting your work. Do not be afraid, just keep on.

Umm actually 2 of the stories are sci fi and 3 of them have killers...

my short stories deal with killers, sci-fi with lots of technology, etc. I am not sure they would fit in here.
thanks for the invite anyway
chord0

Thanks for checking it out!  Look forward to doing the same in return.

I'm not a big novel sort of guy. That said, from what I've looked over as a whole, you're doing well for yourself. I dared not to get too in depth, because what I know is poetry... and not anything too prose.

I'm happy for the invite, and glad to have poked around a little. Keep up the good work on the project,
and perhaps check out some of my essays or my poetry.
Thanks, and keep doing your thing--