hmm. this may be interesting.

sounds good :-)

It's an interesting premise - although I have to be honest, teen romance always get me thinking of something more explicit, I know it's probably not your intention; but this sounded dark to me? Have you thought about the significance of the broken mirror? And what is it about coming forward first - in relation to Olivia and Adrion[Adrian?...I am not familiar with the way you've spelt it, but it's definitely an interesting variant; sounds very classical...]...But are you meaning, who will approach the other first? I'm assuming, also, that Adrion is a bit of a trouble-maker, but in what way? I suppose I'm hinting at the fact we don't know how much of a bad boy he really is...Although, it's interesting that Olivia seems to be a bit more vulnerable with that willingless for conformity, fitting in et al.[and that small piece of information makes me think if she's affected with some dark internalized misery...]; but you say she's attracted to him, maybe from afar, and it sounds like she's looking for some excitement...[ Which is a bit typical, I suppose...And, yes, I'll let you read into that more...I'm way too good at[unintentionally] putting my foot in mouth here on WEbook...]...But I hope you get some other input, too, and I hope it serves you well...Also, I'll add that you stick to your priniciples about what you want to do regardless... So, I suppose I'm saying believe in yourself[but in a less fortune-cookie-sort've way]...I wish you every luck developing things and I hope to return in the not-so-distant future....

hi. im heather! and im asking for some help with this one... im just not sure how to start out.. so any ideas would be nice :)

ok thanks guys