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Project Leader:
smilingthunder
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The WEbook community -
Who Can Write:
All Participants -
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Fiction -
Genre:
Action/Adventure
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Language:
English
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Movie Ending Re-writes
Take a movie, any movie, and write a different ending.
Explain the vision you have of how the ending that was used at the theater was not correct, and then write what you would like it to have been like.
Have Fun. (This is meant to be a fun project, so be light hearted; don't BE A mud-slinger as a feedbacker. Instead, sit down, think about a movie you loved, but hated how it ended, and then exercise your mind on how you could improve the end. When you do that, you will be in the frame of min ... more »
Explain the vision you have of how the ending that was used at the theater was not correct, and then write what you would like it to have been like.
Have Fun. (This is meant to be a fun project, so be light hearted; don't BE A mud-slinger as a feedbacker. Instead, sit down, think about a movie you loved, but hated how it ended, and then exercise your mind on how you could improve the end. When you do that, you will be in the frame of min ... more »
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Julie and Julia
The end had Julie visiting the museum of Julia's kitchen and leaving butter.
Instead of this I would have made her realize that the phone call from the reporter saying that Julia "hated her blog" was likely a misquote or outright lie, and have Julie attempt to contact julia herself. Having her role-model for the entire movie alive and kicking, then not even write her a letter or stop by for a cup of coffee is an insanely self-centered way of accepting things. It leaves out the option that Julia is exactly what she seems to Julie and not the ogre the reporter suggested. Julia worte the book so women could cook from it, why would she not like to meet someone that has had success with something she wrote for that very purpose?
Take this all as you will. It's more a critique than a rewrite.
The end had Julie visiting the museum of Julia's kitchen and leaving butter.
Instead of this I would have made her realize that the phone call from the reporter saying that Julia "hated her blog" was likely a misquote or outright lie, and have Julie attempt to contact julia herself. Having her role-model for the entire movie alive and kicking, then not even write her a letter or stop by for a cup of coffee is an insanely self-centered way of accepting things. It leaves out the option that Julia is exactly what she seems to Julie and not the ogre the reporter suggested. Julia worte the book so women could cook from it, why would she not like to meet someone that has had success with something she wrote for that very purpose?
Take this all as you will. It's more a critique than a rewrite.
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I just gave an invite to all on my friends list, I thought I had done that already, sorry bout that, folks, but hope some of you have a beef with a fave movie and another way it could be, and don't let a previous submission stop you if you have an alternative ending then that's great; I will love seeing some different views of how a movie could be.
i thinki figured out how to join this. it's a project,and only the project leader can send me an invite to join the group.
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how do i join this group? i've already submitted something, but it says i haven't joined any groups.
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anyone wants 2 read more of this check out the "Adventure Central" group. fiction, Action/Adventure, english.
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