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My Body, The Waterfall

A collection of poems, I have written. There's not much more I can say about it. Except they are what I feel to be, not very conventional in most ways. I do use a lot of free verse though.

A collection of poems, I have written. Some of what I feel to be my best.

If you enjoy spiritual work, I'd hope that you would enjoy this.

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coelhino

5/28/2009 5:00 PM PDT

Hi thank you so much for the invite. i hope that you enjoy my poems as much as i enjoyed writing them. my poems are my only way to express how i feel. I hope my poems make a great contirbution to your project.

Bryan

Maia06

4/11/2009 8:52 PM PDT

I have read just about everything in your project at this point. You've got a couple of pieces in here I think I'll dwell on a bit...they're so close to so good, but the ways I think they could be improved are like a tickle in my brain I can't quite bring into focus.

The rest, most of them, almost all of them....stunning. Breath taking. I'm commenting here because each in turn leaves me speechless and I've nothing to say at the end of reading them. The picture next to your name...surely that is a child? Surely that can't be the old soul who sees not just the world in front of him, but through it to the very fiber of its creation.

These beautiful exaltations of the intangible, these joyous celebrations of rebirth and life and the cycles that make the world, and even the rare moments there is lamentation, even these are colored with appreciation for the chance to be a part of them....these are a gift to anyone who reads them. I hope multitudes do.

Charmlessman

4/6/2009 10:08 PM PDT

Dude I think every body has had the same prob it takes a while to see how the world turns here great stuff by the way.

Bravo, John

Brian_Kupillas

11/3/2008 5:09 PM PST

Just a heads up to everybody: This was my first project, and I didn't exactly know that inviting people to join meant inviting them to help write. So, I'm sorry for the misunderstanding. I'll have to come up with another project where everybody can join in on.

JAH_5

10/25/2008 9:26 PM PDT

thanks for the invite

JadedDragon

10/8/2008 4:38 PM PDT

thanks for the invite. It would be good to know a lil more about what you are looking for from those you invite so I know what I'm agreeing to by joining please.

gregpransky

9/20/2008 11:39 PM PDT

I just happen to have a poem on hand that would make an excellent addition, I wager. I wrote it just after a break up with my ex-girlfriend.

beansbaby

9/18/2008 12:24 AM PDT

thankyou for the invite hunny

fritz

9/15/2008 9:30 AM PDT

Thanks for the invite.

Horiari

9/10/2008 11:30 PM PDT

I thought I was unique to be invited...lol but I guess we all are!

heskaj

9/10/2008 10:36 AM PDT

let me know how i can help

heyheymani

9/7/2008 12:55 PM PDT

Thanks for the invite, I'll see if I can add it in.

Groovy

9/4/2008 9:33 PM PDT

yeah thanks for the invite!

cowboymomma

9/3/2008 2:42 PM PDT

what type of work are you looking for here? are you wanting me to submit some of my spiritual or uplifting poetry to your project? I am new here, dont know what an 'invite' really means. Please take a second to let me know!! thanks and

God Bless,
Dusty (cowboymomma)
dustywattenbarger@yahoo.com

humphreyswill

9/1/2008 8:52 AM PDT

Cheers!

demonic_inferno

8/31/2008 5:47 AM PDT

Thanks for the invite :)

heyheymani

8/29/2008 9:14 PM PDT

tnkyou for the invitation

holliehobbie

8/29/2008 8:52 AM PDT

THX for the invite!

Budo7

8/26/2008 10:23 AM PDT

Thanks for the invite

free386

8/25/2008 3:50 PM PDT

thanks for the invite....i enjoy your work

chills

8/25/2008 3:41 PM PDT

thanks for the invite

bamdida

8/25/2008 2:45 PM PDT

Thank you for the invite

CRaMcGuirt

8/25/2008 8:30 AM PDT

Thanks for the invite, and give me an idea of how I can contribute, beyond commenting on the poems...

cosmojamison

8/24/2008 9:51 AM PDT

Thanks for the invite

Bluestar

8/24/2008 4:32 AM PDT

Nice poems. Thanks for inviting me!

BabygirlHarbour

8/23/2008 5:35 PM PDT

Thank you for inviting me

Hannah_Hazel

8/23/2008 4:17 AM PDT

Thanks forthe invite (Y)

Hannah-Hazel
xxx

Brynn

8/23/2008 3:03 AM PDT

Just let me know how I can help. Thanks for the invitation

comiksin

8/22/2008 3:53 PM PDT

thanks for inviting me, but idk how im supposed to help..

George_Jane

8/22/2008 3:43 PM PDT

Thanks for the invite. I just have a question though, how did you choose who all you were going to invite for this?

gonff

8/22/2008 2:56 PM PDT

ty for the invite

HannahMaria

8/22/2008 1:36 PM PDT

thanks for inviting me. any help = let me know.!

flyazneagle

8/22/2008 12:12 PM PDT

Thanks for inviting me. Any help you need or anything, just let me know. ^^

gonzodave

8/21/2008 12:59 PM PDT

'say too, that you have'

~gonzodave - 'The Idiot' by Dostoevsky

gonzodave

8/21/2008 12:57 PM PDT

Well, first, thank you much for the invitation. And, I would like to say to have an interesting list of authors on your profile. Finally, this is one very big list of invitees. How did you select this cast of contributors? Interesting.

~gonzodave

greet1

8/21/2008 11:50 AM PDT

Thanks for the invite. Bernie.

Blakkthought

8/21/2008 10:23 AM PDT

Im here Brah i got you.

Ghast

8/21/2008 2:23 AM PDT

Hey
whatever genre based on anything,
I'd be happy to help.

xKatex

8/20/2008 6:43 PM PDT

Hi there. Thanks for inviting me to join you on your project, I'd be glad to. I am not much of a poet but I will try.
Nice poems by the way.
<3 k8

GloriasPoems

8/20/2008 4:06 PM PDT

Hi
Thank you for the project invite and I would love to join if I can be of help.

Accela

8/20/2008 11:48 AM PDT

Hello. Thank you for the project invite. I've looked over what you have and I am very impressed. They're amazing!

bballeagle3

8/19/2008 10:07 PM PDT

help*

bballeagle3

8/19/2008 10:07 PM PDT

how can i helo?

Dawnit

8/19/2008 6:11 PM PDT

thank you for the invite

Diva

8/19/2008 5:24 AM PDT

Thanks for the invite, Really appreciate it ,

ashleydhall

8/18/2008 9:17 PM PDT

Thank you for the invite. I really appreciate it.

eluamous_nailo

8/18/2008 12:48 PM PDT

Thanks for the invite.

dreanne

8/18/2008 7:18 AM PDT

thanks for the invite..ur stle of writing is similar to mine

Yolonda_Lee

8/18/2008 7:03 AM PDT

Thanks for the invite.

Caterino

8/17/2008 6:46 PM PDT

I for one am having a hard time on this sight. I excepted the invite but don't know what is expected of me. I posted books but cant read them. HELP ME.

or:

Footprints

8/17/2008 6:23 PM PDT

Yes, I would love to join your project, I need a little help in what it is that your asking...to contribute poetry..or feed-back?
Footprints
(p.s.) would love either.

Chamorita_Poet

8/17/2008 5:20 PM PDT

Thank you for inviting me as a part of your project. I'm new to this site, so I don't know how I can help you or what you want me to do with this honor.

I'll read your submissions within this project. Anything else?

Jourdene Rosella (Chamorita Poet)

fudgeripples

8/17/2008 2:14 PM PDT

thanks 4 the invite! i'm pretty good at poetry, but i'm new 2 this site, so i'm waiting 2 check things out b4 i help any1... good luck tho :]

Chelsea_S_Wolfe

8/17/2008 11:53 AM PDT

I will help in anyway I can ^_^

Enchanted_Lass

8/17/2008 8:51 AM PDT

Thanks for the invite, what can I do for you?

Caitlin

8/17/2008 12:03 AM PDT

thanks for the invite and i'd love to help you in any way i can!!! just let me know, i think i'm a pretty good editor and spell checker.

emmalea_21

8/16/2008 4:24 PM PDT

Thank you for the invite but I can't write poetry to save my life and I have a few other projects I'm focussing on at the moment.

EndiaAne

8/16/2008 11:16 AM PDT

thank you for the invite, but i'm completely focused on my novel right now. if you do need some assitance though, i'll be glad to help. right now, i'm just up to my neck in random ideas...have a good day writing though!

Brokenangel1977

8/16/2008 12:20 AM PDT

Thanks for the invite. I am not sure how I can be of assistance as most of my poetry revolved around anger, despair, and lost love. If you need me to proofread or critique (not that I am THAT good of a poet), I will be happy to help. Just let me know what I can do.

FrankJames

8/15/2008 9:05 PM PDT

Hey. Thanks for the invite. To be honest, I'm a mystery writer and I don't know much about poetry (except maybe the roses are red poem, etc...ect..., but that doesn't count). Anyway, I'll be happy to share some insight on what you need.
Thanks again.

Ortiz

8/15/2008 3:23 PM PDT

hey thanks for the invite. what kind of stuff do you need?

Carnival_Poet

8/15/2008 3:16 PM PDT

Hi! Thanks for the invite - what can I do to be of some use?

Alfeia

8/15/2008 1:44 PM PDT

lets start theme writing, and continue, for example love, joy, anger, fear.

love being our first theme.

Alfeia

8/15/2008 1:41 PM PDT

sounds great. Alfeia

DarkWarrior

8/15/2008 7:18 AM PDT

Hi thanks for the invite, so what would you require of me as a site participent ?? Please messege m eback with details.

Overthemoon94

8/14/2008 8:36 PM PDT

uhm hi
What would you like my to do?

Asilenna

8/14/2008 7:15 PM PDT

I am very new to this site and still feeling my way around it. I'm not sure what it is all about. What exactly is an invite for? Contributing my work to yours? Proffreading and editing? Just let me know before i accept! Thanks!!

Ember_Shadows

8/14/2008 4:01 PM PDT

Thanks for the Invite. :) I write poetry sometimes in my spare time; I'm pretty good at four verse poems. Mostly mine depict/describe places or are simply outlets for depression or sorrow. Other than that, I'm mostly good with free verse.

EdMeligIndustan

8/14/2008 1:50 PM PDT

Before I join in, pls. tell me what my role is. I see that the project leader (that is you) is the only one who can write in the project. Am a little bit lost here.

Crazybaby

8/14/2008 1:21 PM PDT

thank you for the invite. Please let me know how i can be of help.

brett

8/14/2008 1:13 PM PDT

Im ready when ever you're ready. Remember I'm a writer but I don't write, I create.

darkened_jade

8/14/2008 1:11 PM PDT

I'm happy to review if you like but I'm not exactly the poetic type, I like sentence structure far too much in my own writing.

Amanda_80

8/14/2008 11:58 AM PDT

Thank-you for the invite. Anything I can do to help would be my pleasure... Thank's again

billycuster

8/14/2008 11:07 AM PDT

hello, thx for invite. what work You have for me? I want to help at project. Regards.

angelab

8/14/2008 11:00 AM PDT

hi there, I've written poetry in the past. would be happy to read anyone's work. I mostly write short stories and novels now, but I read tons of stuff, whatever I can get my hands on. thanks...

XChunkyMonkeyX

8/14/2008 10:28 AM PDT

Hello, thanks for the invite,
what do you want me to do?
XChunkymonkeyX

x2steps

8/14/2008 9:15 AM PDT

Thanks for the invite. What would you like me to do?

dreambig

8/14/2008 7:44 AM PDT

cool, what do you need help with?

bballeagle3

8/14/2008 12:28 AM PDT

Sure man, thanks for the invite, how can I help, drawing or poetry (I'm good at both, but better at poetry)
So whatever it is, just let me know

Dot_Martin

8/13/2008 9:52 PM PDT

Thank you for the invite, how may I help you?

coomara9

8/13/2008 9:15 PM PDT

Thanks for the invite. How would you like me to participate

Distorted

8/13/2008 8:56 PM PDT

Ok. What do you want help with..?

ashley2

8/13/2008 7:14 PM PDT

IAM A GOOD..VERY GOOD POET&YET I DONT KNOW HOW HELPFUL I CAN BE BUT WHATEVER YOU NEED ME TO DO I WILL TRY=)
- ASHLEY!

DAKaine

8/13/2008 7:08 PM PDT

than k you for the invite to your project.

celloplayermd

8/13/2008 7:01 PM PDT

I'm not a very good poet, but it seems that you are... I'm not sure how helpful I can be, but I'll try and add feedback when I have time.

ZRVera

8/13/2008 6:02 PM PDT

What kind of poems? I do write poetry, but it can take me a while before I figure out something I want to write about. I just signed up today, so I'm still figuring out some things and I'm not exactly sure what's going on and exactly what I can do on the site.

Brandon_Alan

8/13/2008 6:00 PM PDT

sorry not a poet

BirdDogg34

8/13/2008 4:03 PM PDT

Hey, I'm not a poet, sorry. I'll gladly read some of your work later on when I get time, though, if you are looking for feedback,

ameless

8/13/2008 3:45 PM PDT

i have received your invite, this is my first day to this, so i am still learning whats going on.
what is it u are looking for? help with writing or adding other peoples poems to yours?

BrokenAngel25

8/13/2008 11:55 AM PDT

Were you looking for additions, and in what topic? It seems that you are interested in spiritual poems, and my inspiration is more emotional.

BobInLV

8/13/2008 11:26 AM PDT

Thank you. I am still trying to discover what commiting to a project entails. I will get back to you, because as yet I am still struggling to find my own direction here.

CharismaRravine

8/13/2008 10:29 AM PDT

i wrote a poem about a waterfall last year, i could add that. other than that, i don't do much poetry

bki_krm

8/13/2008 9:51 AM PDT

you need to change your description to a colection of poemes others and you have writen if you are looking for others to join.. what is the main theam you are looking for in poems? spiritual?

chord0

8/13/2008 9:29 AM PDT

hello
thanks for the invitation, I have 2 poems I can add about God and nature, I also have done some translations of poems dealing with Nature, etc which are in An anthology of Spanish poetry, a book in progress.

let me know what you will accept.
thanks
chord0