Yes I loved these. If you want to look at mine just click on my name.

Good work, I liked reading them and enjoyed all three!
  please...http://www.webook.com/project/Three-of-my-best-Poems

All three are quite good!  Very worthy of publication.  I particularly liked the inventiveness of 'Tall Tale.'  I look forward to reading  more of your work.

Good enough to be published. Voted.

And if you have the time, check out mine...

http://www.webook.com/project/Animal-Cruelty

good stuff here with the first being my favourite, thumbs up

Very good luck i vote...

Shah. X

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Best-Three-Poems-WEBook-2009

I enjoyed your poems

you obviously have talent.  you have all the above. 

i vote publish.

I enjoyed reading your work but didn't feel like it always flowed freely and at times had to stop and re-read a stanza or line in order to keep up.  Good work.

I love Runaway the most.
Nice work.

If you got time;
http://www.webook.com/project/Born-of-The-Sun

Well done. All good poems.

http://www.webook.com/project/Top-3-Poems-of-Assorted-Interest

The alliteration in the third was great. You have my vote!

The first one  was my fav!

Much talent displayed in your writing but I feel you need to re-read and improve certain parts to be worthy of publication.

Your natural feel for words and flow is spoilt in parts by lack of care in the choice of word or phrase - you must make every word count and deserve its inclusion because like the rotten apple in the barrel they contaminate the rest.

Your work is original and for the most part enjoyable to read but with a little more thought and care it could be brilliant.

Kind Regards  John

Good Luck with the vote.



http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition


If you have the time.

That was great. you got my vote

The first two poems are interesting; the first one, I like because it is very original, as it seems to me that it points out that theory might be useful, but not enough, at the same time letting one to imagine that through reading the great writers, one can see the theory in practice, or in other words, at least to my mind, one learns much more while reading, say Sartre or Dostoyevsky, because thinking and feelings, distorted or not, are to be found together on their works, having an awakening effect upon us, making us more observant of our own and others experiences;  the second poem, I like because it perhaps reminds us about one of Baudelaire’s poems in prose, where the soul asks to be taken “anywhere out of this world”, and also about Plato’s chariot, together creating, what it seems to me to be a beautifully honest point of view of a moment looking at the human condition. Publish.

I enjoyed the nonsensical nature of Tall Tale.

I thought a few lines needed a bit more spit and polish.  Among them, "Stuffy slot sick from stuffing."  Using stuffy and stuffing in the same line detracted from the flow of your poem.

Likewise, "Freaking forms form formation" might benefit from a bit more variety.

But, overall, I enjoyed it . . . especially "Search for sense seems so stale."

Your poem, On Writing, is a unique and interesting read. 

I voted publish, but think that a line or two could use a bit more smoothing before being pasted on the page for all eternity.

Wonderfully well worded wise whippet of whimsy

Oh yea man I vote yes.  I can see your use of stanzas I should have used in The Bubble.  Thanks man great job and best wishes

I actually think that some of the best pieces I've seen, or even written myself (now apparently I am a poet too! lol) are purely from the heart - there is a raw, free flowing unconforming truth to that kind of writing.  I'm not one for structure, or would comment on how other people approach their own work ... often turning out the same same old ... but then I think you already get that.  Stay original.   I loved your arrangement on words, and I thought all three flowed very well indeed ... clever compostions on all three.  Well done, I enjoyed them very much.

http://www.webook.com/project/Quirked

I love these! You have my vote!

http://www.webook.com/project/In-Times-Of-Love-There-Were

I liked the first one the most. The other two weren't bad by any means, but I feel they could have used some polishing.

this is amazing! You have my vote.

PUBLISH!!! great job and good luck!


if you want to read mine:

http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE

thank you!

A very good choice of poems. All so well written and original.
Excellant work. You have my vote.

very good work, well done


http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles

Lovely selection.  My fav is 'On Writing' but I like 'em all.  You have my vote.

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Trilogy

On the other hand, writing that is only done with the heart is often very bad writing indeed.  It really does take both.  It takes all of you.

Writing is more than logic and intellect. Anyone with a heart understands that. Voted. I love your poem entitled, On Writing.

voted.....

http://www.webook.com/project/3-Best

A yes vote.