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Project Leader:
Cynthia_Jones
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The WEbook community -
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Category:
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Language:
English
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My Three Submissions
These are my three of my many best poems.
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I voted publish. I LOVE YOUR STYLE. it's easy to read it flows its simple its creative. I've been hoping to find work like this. Good luck!
I thought sure I had already voted and commented on these -- I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to get back to them. Nicely done!
"oklahoma city, thirteen years later" and "The faces of war" deal with real life drama in a nice rythym and beat. "Four padded walls" was a bit funny and mixed it up from the harsh reality we live in. I give it a thumbs up!
Oklahoma City, Thirteen years later was extremely emotional, and I really liked its sense of flow in each stanza my favourite being the first and the slightly reversed last stanza.
Four Padded walls is Hilarious, but also haunting at the same time, very well done.
Faces of War was written elegantly just like your first poem in the three. I like the rhyme you used throughout, and once again the beginning and the end slightly reversed enforces the poem a lot.
Fantastic job, and good luck and the vote.
Four Padded walls is Hilarious, but also haunting at the same time, very well done.
Faces of War was written elegantly just like your first poem in the three. I like the rhyme you used throughout, and once again the beginning and the end slightly reversed enforces the poem a lot.
Fantastic job, and good luck and the vote.
nice writes, from remembering those who died 13 years ago to padded walls, although I don't think you should have kicked the cat, I am a cat lover, and the faces of war, what a terrible thing war is, so many die for all the wrong reasons and leave loved one's behind, no matter which side you are on your enemy has a famile just like you do, I voted yes,
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these are very good, well done, good luck in the vote
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles
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form content and image. these are great captures.
i vote publish.
i vote publish.
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a diverse body of work, worthy of a YES vote!!!
if you want to find mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you!
if you want to find mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you!
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