My Whimsical Thoughts

Inspired by my past, homelife, and philosophical idealism.

I was inspired to write mainly due to my past homelife. The poem's wil speak for themselves as to the image of my homelife before moving away. I am full of thoughts, sometimes very incongruent ones, but philosophical nonetheless.

Some of my poems are very melancholic and somber; however, as a person I am quite optimistic in all that I embark upon. I survived all of the austerities life provided thus far and I am indefatigably moving in the direction of success.

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naiveandwitty

11/4/2008 2:48 PM PST

you certain have the mechanisms down packed. that is, you know the rules of poetry. your vocab is vast. and you poems come across somewhat like philosophy.

this accounts for a great deal to me.

thumbs up.

keep writing. never stop.

nrhatch

7/18/2008 3:53 PM PDT

Tool -- I expect that you understand what you mean in each of these poems, but they aren't speaking to me in language that I can understand.

They remind me of the musings that I had in high school, but they need more thought if you really want to share them with others. Good Luck!