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Fiction
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Biographies and Memoirs
Biographies and Memoirs
Language:
English
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11/18/2008 09:25 PM PT
Wow you are a great writer girl
11/18/2008 06:20 AM PT
I like this work, but just to complete it, you may want to think about altering the start a little! you bring into play a 2nd person by saying;-" if i am you and you are me" then you say;- "then who is who? and who is me? . do you not think it may sound better if you said;- " Then who is who, and who are we?" its just a thought. after all, it's your work and every writer has his or her own style.
11/17/2008 12:44 PM PT
I really like your work- the emotional imagery is dark yet hopeful at the same time- just my style.... good luck!
11/16/2008 12:39 PM PT
Got my vote, go for it!
11/14/2008 07:43 AM PT
you have my vote
11/13/2008 09:52 AM PT
good job!
11/13/2008 09:49 AM PT
yea!
11/10/2008 05:37 AM PT
Vote :-)
11/9/2008 03:00 PM PT
Its so sad when parents betray kids god bless heal in jesus i will pray for you god bless mike
11/9/2008 02:58 PM PT
life is never a end just beginning mike
11/9/2008 07:57 AM PT
great poetry keep up the good work, I feel your words so deeply.good luck with getting it published you havea thumbs up from me
11/9/2008 06:48 AM PT
sexy
11/8/2008 03:30 PM PT
I really like your poem it shows that you are really kind to others.
11/7/2008 11:47 PM PT
Interesting work, good luck
11/6/2008 09:51 AM PT
You should try approaching this from a perspective we haven't seen quite as often as the "misunderstood emotional loner." It kind of diminishes the piece since I feel like I've read this many times before.
11/6/2008 09:37 AM PT
Great Work Here! You've Got My Vote
11/6/2008 09:20 AM PT
ALL IS TRUE AND THEN IS NOT,ALL AND NONE OF US HAD BEEN THIS CONFUSE AT CERTAIN POINT OF OUR LIVES,GOOD JOB.
11/4/2008 04:41 PM PT
Your poetry is very emo and cliche *yaaawn*
11/4/2008 04:25 PM PT
Got my vote, best of luck very cool
11/4/2008 08:45 AM PT
i wrote there for I love it
11/2/2008 10:15 AM PT
It's great.
11/1/2008 02:45 PM PT
I like it
10/23/2008 02:59 PM PT
good luck with publication!!
10/15/2008 11:22 AM PT
Great poem! Very well written!
9/13/2008 07:24 AM PT
That's what happen to me when I don't drink coffee...
9/11/2008 07:56 AM PT
That is amazing ! We are all individuals and should be allowed to be so. I dare people to define "normal". I am touched by your words deeply. All through life I was made to feel different; but while they were judging me on my outward appearance-they had no thought nor care about the heart inside me that cares so much for all people.
Keep writing .
Keep writing .
9/10/2008 01:22 PM PT
This is great! Very good in form and style!
9/8/2008 05:13 PM PT
Interesting concept
And well delivered
Makes you think
And I LOVE poems that do that
And well delivered
Makes you think
And I LOVE poems that do that
9/3/2008 04:26 AM PT
heya!
cool poem well written and its flows good too!
comment on mine please? :)
cool poem well written and its flows good too!
comment on mine please? :)
9/1/2008 01:27 AM PT
yeah, great poem! i usually offer some sort of advice when reviewing things, but this time i think it doesn't need any! looking forward to reading the others!
8/27/2008 04:47 PM PT
very well written! :)
8/11/2008 09:00 PM PT
freakin sweet and awesome, for lack of better words, try my poetry and tell me what you think, please
8/11/2008 07:21 PM PT
Great poem. It really captures a universal struggle that all human beings go through...trying to figure out who we are and where our place in the world is.
8/11/2008 07:13 PM PT
I like it. It makes you think a little about individuality a little.
8/11/2008 07:12 PM PT
This is a really cool poem...i like how you express your doubt in your own self identity ;]
my fav lines are....
"I took My life my life in vain
But who am I if I am you and you are me"
my fav lines are....
"I took My life my life in vain
But who am I if I am you and you are me"
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