Mystery of the Pacific

A story about a cult which rules the government and a mysterious island in the pacific

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Kitty_Kimi

11/2/2009 4:33 PM PST

Sounds interesting straight away

CrzHrsGal

10/3/2009 3:00 PM PDT

Wow, this sounds promising.

Vendetta

9/15/2009 4:37 AM PDT

If you are reading my work then thank you if at times I take a long time to change or fix a chapter please be patient and bear with me I'm writing this as I go and sometimes I don't exactly know how to word the things I want to say. Thanks for those that have actually taken their time to read it. If you do read it please comment because nothing is perfect and it definitely needs to be fixed.

Vendetta

9/9/2009 8:18 PM PDT

I don't know which prologue is better so I'm putting both up because I want to see what you guys think is better. If they're both just as bad then please tell me so I can try again thanks in advance :D